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SpoonfedArt
Small steps. Commissions are closed for the moment. Just working through my queue.
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That was amazing
yeah dash you forgot that shit was temporary,
you my fine feathered equine are screwed
tighter than a light-bulb
It appears the image no longer exists
10045809
I was able to find the image, at least the one that's on the cover right now. The artist tag is artist:ninjapony. Just enter "artist:ninjapony, tail censor" in Derpibooru's search bar.
10045915
That did it.
This part was nice. There's not much fics that seem to degrade by spitting; hope that happens more in the future.
10046537
Most of my clopfics are gonna have some spit play at some point, cause I absolutely love it. Especially when it's used for degradation. Glad you liked it too.
Nice work
This story needs either an epilogue or a sequeal... hell i just want more. There is not enough goid quality clop fics and even fewer great quality Ones.
I have an Idea for A series stemming from this comic, it’s where rainbow and Twilight use that machine to give rainbow more slaves and end up controlling all of Equestria. Also this is a great story and keep up the good work
This is your official review from Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
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------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-It is nice to see a reversal of this common clopfic trope.
-Hard to visualize them without knowing what they're wearing.
-Doesn't really fully utilize the mind control fetish.
-Trying to do bondage, mind control, and foot fetish all in one short fic, none of them are really done as deeply as they could/should be.
-Things escalate very quickly, not letting Rainbow savor her new role for long.
-Rainbow comes off as a real asshole in this.
-The actual meat of the fic (pun intended) was quite good and satisfyingly detailed.
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 92/100
Allure: 67/100
Enticement: 80/100
Immersion: 80/100
Prose Quality: 91/100
Total Score: 410/500
The more specialized scores for individual prizes, as well as the results of the community poll, will be published when the full results are announced. If this story wins any awards, there will be another post in the story comments sometime after June 9th announcing that this story has won.
Thank you for participating, and thank you for contributing to Fimfic's collection of clop!