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Snap Shutter and Mane Allgood bring an orphaned and homeless colt to Scootaloo and her aunts as a temporary home while they leave to try to find a new home for the colt, and Scootaloo and her aunts quickly discover the colt does not behave like a regular pony.

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Intresssting story, but for my taste a bit dry

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Glad you liked it, and sorry about it not being your type of story, this one actually went through several changes before I decided on the final project.

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You canĀ“t make it fit for evrypony, but seriously the idea is great and I just love how his lifestyle colides with all other Ponies in town.
That with Mother nature is also a great idea and i liked the story about her.

Great story.

"I highly doubt this Fluttershy can keep track of all the bugs there are." Apex said,

Hee hee hee.

"Sweet, a toothbrush tree." Apex said, and he took a knife out of one of his trash bags and cut off a piece of it, he trimmed the bark off of one end and held it in his mouth. Apex put the knife back in his trash bag and carried them back to Scootaloo's home, he sat and began rubbing the stick on his teeth, Scootaloo came out of her home shortly afterwards,

A neem tree, I suppose. My grandma does a similar thing lol

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I just checked, that is the tree I had in mind when I typed that part.

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Haha, I guessed right then! Great story!

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