Fluttershy is visiting with her parents, and hoping to enjoy a pleasant time with them, so why is she crying? And can Applejack help her to know what's truly important?
Pineapple Love. Beloved Mare. Follow me on Discord: Godfrog#4197 Support me on: My patreon https://ko-fi.com/nailah
Page generated in 0.081 seconds
Total duration
866 users online
638,125 hits today, 2,151,698 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Could tell very early this was going to be a catharsis piece. Nothing wrong with that, we all need to vent.
Also, it is actually very clean. Only really saw a comma which should have been a period and a period outside of quote marks but that was all I noticed.
There's nothing bad about turning an vent into creative catharsis short story. We all need to vent at times when life goes wrong. It was actually very clean. There are few grammar errors with commas and period. Along with the story feeling abit too short. But that's okay tho! Keep on try to improve! And didn't give up hope! ^^
Good story but a bit rushed in the middle
not read the fic yet but was this inspired by the song of the same name?
10265814
No, inspired by my real life
10265891
hope your ok now also would you like a link to the song