This story is a sequel to I Believed in You, Chrysalis…
Ever since her subjects stayed against her, Chrysalis felt betrayed by her subjects and with hate of the ponies of Equestria. She did her best to take revenge, but she always failed. When she met Cozy Gloom, Tirek and Grogar, she began to think that maybe with this team of villains, she could get revenge. But when she fails that too and turns to statue, along with Cozy Glow and Tirek, she has a LOT of time. Lot of time to think about her actions, and she begins to realize how blind she was for hate.
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This is beautiful. It would be even more so if you got some help with editing and proofreading. For example, I can't tell if replacing "Cozy Glow" with "Cozy Gloom" was intentional or not. "Cozy Gloom" is rather fitting, though. Same goes with the previous story.
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I'm so sorry. I already corrected
Chrysalis doesn’t strike me as a pony that would worry about what she’d done to others.
She’d fuss over her own sorry state and how she’d do anything to prevent ending up like that, like she did already, except there’s no more future that she could influence in any way (since she’s now literally a statue) and when she realizes that (there will be a phase, I’m sure), the only thing to reflect upon is the past or the present.
Something along the lines of:
“I would even trade my current life for the life of that traitor (meaning Thorax), just to breathe the air again. Dignity has too much of a price to pay.”
And then
“There are some things i only tell the most trusted of allies, and even then I’d keep some to myself alone. But now i have to admit, and since there’s no running from it, that there were things i wouldn’t even tell myself under any circumstances. So, after having done some thorough thinking over my situation many times like a madmare, I’d like to be open and frank at least with myself here.
I’ll tell myself straight, without much prelude or explanation, maybe, because i wanted to tell it myself a long time ago, and should have i said it any time before being petrified, it might have helped my situation. And because of that, I’m all the more vexed to tell this myself only now, when all is evidently lost and it’s too late for making amends:
I should probably have accepted Starlight’s offer.
I was simply nonplussed at the moment when my hive was ruined, along with my life as i knew it back then, along with loyalty of my servants (although, looking back from my current perspective, it was probably fear alone), and the only thing i have seen in Starlight through the lens of acute frustration is my mortal enemy.
Even though she was offering me salvation right then and there, i could have neither seen it nor accepted it. As i said already, i should have.
I should have drowned my damned dignity to stay afloat myself, i should have apologized to the ponies, i should have listened to, or even freed my servants, should they have asked. I’d have even shared all the love I’ve collected for the countless years with every other creature and had myself turned into goodness knows what, i’d have done anything, really, to keep my freedom to myself”
Didn't realize how much pain she'd caused? That's insulting to her intelligence.
To be fair, she does have a face you just want to feed Taco Bell to.
Keh, Chrysalis refusing Starlight's offer is the only saving grace of season 6 ending.
Though, now given the ending we are bound to get a bunch fics of her redemption/reform/repentance, which is annoying but understandable.
While Jim Miller implied their petrification is more like Twilight's than Discord's (a.k.a. they're asleep), we can do pretty much whatever we want in fanfiction.
But how can Chrysalis sigh as a statue?
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Chrysalis is sighing inside the statue
Can you tell me of where can i find of pic of your story ?
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https://derpibooru.org/1687048?q=reformed
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Oh i see and Thank you very much ^^
Is this to be to be continued ?
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This is the Chrysalis POV when Twilight went to the Chrysalis, Cozy Glow and Tirek statue. The first story was the Twilight POV
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Oh i see
Good idea. But Starlight and Chryssy have hooves, not paws.
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Thank you for showing me an error. I already corrected
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Very very good.
One pound fish.
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I have a draft of the sequel, just not ready yet