After her defeat in Canterlot, Chrysalis awakens deep in the Everfree Forest. Determined to get revenge, she heads North to the unsuspecting Ponyville with plans of impersonating Twilight Sparkle. But will the transformation change more than just her looks? Learn more about the dark Queen, the seeds of corruption, and the power of love as Chrysalis is forced to see the world through an entirely new perspective in "Metamorphosis."
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i just hope twi is going to be ok
Nooo...
Fic in progress with this identical plotline. Looks like I write too slowly.
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If it's any consolation, I'm sure someone has beat me to it, too. It's a ridiculously huge community with a lot of talented artists and authors. (:
And I'm certain our stories would be far from identical, even if the ideas appear to be similar. ;)
I haven't read it, but one thing I will say is that your description is written exactly like a Speech and Debate intro might be (don't worry; that's good).
Yeah! Go Zeco- Oh, your rhyming got you captured by the changelings... Nevermind!
So, is Twilight dead?
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I don't believe that was said anywhere, but she does appear to be in a bit of a bind.
Although the story has a "dark" tag, I'm not intending to take it over the top and kill characters off for the sake of violence--rest assured our little pony won't go down without a fight!
"Well, I'm going to do a book! *Bam* Aw..."
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But seriously, that was... wow.
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You... both of you...
DARN IT my thought-to-be-original idea
Poor Twilight... Please get her out of there! D:
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XD Chrysalis and Twilight seems like a no brainer to me, so I didn't assume the base was going to be too original. But everyone's interpretation is surely unique in their own way, even if they share a basic plot. I encourage you to write your own version :3
What the? Twilight that was a crack dream.
This story is now one of my top favorites. Interesting idea, believable characters, good pacing and well written.
Any though to continue it?
655505 Don't do a book....read a fanfic. From the internet!
Chrysalis really needs to think before she talks.
I actually have had a "next chapter" worked out for awhile, but I was rushing to get some art done for a convention this past weekend (and hunting for jobs!) Now that I have a pretty nice job and no pressure to produce my other forms of art, I plan on working on and finishing another chapter in the near future. Thanks for every watch, favorite and comment so far--it's encouraging and helpful reading the variety of comments posted. (:
Any news on an update?
Is the story dead? It's been months...
It lives!
I want to upvote this, I really do... It's just... Well, it's at 69. and I refuse to be the one to change that.
it takes you 44 weeks to plan and write this out?
Haha, I wouldn't blame anyone for never upvoting this again. :P However, after a nice and thorough polishing of the old and updating with the new, I'm hoping an upvote will be a bit more tempting/deserved. :)
I'll be either uploading the completed version of the current chapter (#5) later, or release it as a separate, also short chapter.
Edit: Oh my, I got the year wrong when I came back in time. Sorry for the delay in update on your end; I just saw the "May 29th" and thought it was close enough. I will try to keep to an appropriate and timely schedule henceforth, haha.
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Zecora the number one MC of Equestria.//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
What about air? Is there breathing holes in Twilight's prison? I mean it's been a day or so so obviously there has to be right?
good story can't wait for you to make the next chapter.
i love this face
I didn't expect this to ever update again.
By the way, somehow I got two notifications about this, with just a minute between them. Did you accidentally unpublish it once or something?
Hasbro seems to think so.
Hey, I remember this story!
Yes, is snack time...
Of course, things won't be easy.
Flash Sentry?
"but the magic of these unicorns was pure, powerful." It should but the magic of these two lovers was pure, powerful."
So Twilight is trapped... and fears using teleportacion.
Yeah, being Twilight is not easy.
Wait, if the Changelings are flying, why is Zecora running over their tracks? And she says they started flying after drinking essence from Chrysalis and that happened last chapter, so it feels like that was a while ago.