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Krystal Clearskies


Hi. I write things and have trouble finishing them. My greatest joy will always be reading comments from people enjoying my stories. Talk with me sometime!

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Applejack is a simple mare, who has always had simple aspirations for her life. One fateful day during a visit to the Ponyville hospital, Applejack is given news that will rock her world forever.

Needing somepony to tell the horrible news to, there's only one pony Applejack trusts this horrible news with. Upon sharing said news, she discovers she and her friend have more in common than she once thought.

While I wrote this story in response to The Last Problem, there are no spoilers in this story. This story has hints of romance but it is mainly a tragedy with some feel good in it. I hope you enjoy. I worked hard on this one.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

That's the great part about lesbian relationships, isn't it? One of you can be infertile and that just means it's the other one who gets to have the kid?

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Maybe in conventional lesbian relationships. But the point of my story here is they're both unable to have children.

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Thank you! Means a lot to me.

Hey everyone. So, i hope you enjoyed the story. And if you didn't, don't hesitate to tell me why you didn't. Criticism is welcome.

I like what you started, it was kinda lackluster, but good overall.

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Would you mind telling me what was lackluster? I'd love to know so i can improve.

I used to have a friend who was infertile. Poor girl, she was heartbroken when she found out. That was 2 years ago, but now she's a step-mom and loves those kids like her own. So, this story hits a few heartstrings with me. Nice work.

There's always Apple Bloom.

Awww. I have ovarian cysts, and they hurt like hell. AJ is surely in physical pain as well. :fluttershysad:

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