Starlight's Lesson

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Though there were a few bumps along the way, Starlight Glimmer now stands as the new Head Mare of Princess Twilight's School of Friendship. Today is her first day in the role, and to mark the event, she's decided to take the first class with the students. But there is one question. What to teach them?

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Scholarly-Cimmerian

Scholarly-Cimmerian #1 · Dec 16th, 2019 · 6 · ·

An excellent story with a nicely-delivered lesson.

Vaguely Demented

Vaguely Demented #2 · Dec 16th, 2019 · 7 · ·

They do say experience is the best teacher.

Comickook

Comickook #3 · Dec 16th, 2019 · 2 · ·

Great job on this one-shot peak onto Starlight's first day as Head-Mare of the Friendship School. The exchanges, characterizations and general wrap-up were quite well done in all the right places. I particularly liked the point out that mistakes can be useful as learning tools as long as you are careful, which actually IS a pretty good lesson to teach.

I'm definitely going to be looking forward to your remaining one-shots for the year (as well as more of your work in general next year).

And Happy Holidays in advance.

SpikeSmolder fan

SpikeSmolder fan #4 · Dec 16th, 2019 · 2 · ·

Very insightful & deep, now that was quite a lesson Starlight has learned.

Happy Holidays James!

Mares Guyver

Mares Guyver #5 · Dec 16th, 2019 · 2 · ·

A perfect way for Starlight to begin her role as teacher and Head-Mare of the Friendship School. Well done!

StraightToThePointStudio

StraightToThePointStudio #6 · Dec 16th, 2019 · 5 · ·

Such a story like this just popped in my eyes as interesting! So why the heck not read it?! My gosh, I don't regret reading this one bit! So since that was the case, I made a little audio adapter for it! Hope ya didn't mind! Great plot, the lesson was something the readers can learn and implement into their own lives, it was just pure bliss!

Audio Link: https://youtu.be/E2qxCgotUWY

(I don't mean for this comment to be offensive!)

Dan

Dan #7 · Dec 16th, 2019 · 5 · ·

I...have made my fair share of mistakes...and then some. Mistakes that can never be forgotten. Mistakes that shouldn't be forgotten. Mistakes that, for a time, made me feel like I was never going to be worthy of having the friends and life that I do." Again, she looked up, seeing her students focus their gaze completely on her. "When you make a mistake, something that looks like it will forever mark the relationships you have with others, it can be the most terrible thing in the world to realise. All of a sudden, you're struck with the knowledge that you've done something bad. Something unforgiveable. Something that will, perhaps, make you feel like you've ruined whatever chance you might have had to be with others or to make friends."

"Anyone can make an error, but that error doesn't become a mistake until you refuse to correct it."
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