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I am an Anti-Brony, I hate MLP, so why am I here? Read this...! https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/769267/if-im-an-anti-brony-why-am-i-on-this-site

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"An important message at the end of the fic"

Twilight hears word of a business pony who resents work, play, and even her own rich business, and seems to be causing quite a bit of misery for others, which leads her to try to set her on the right track, resulting in a frightening and horrific tragedy!

LESSON: Abusing, Bullying, and Pushing someone can lead to serious, Karma and Consequences.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 5 )
Comment posted by Starlight Nova deleted Sep 12th, 2019
Comment posted by Mx Potential deleted Sep 12th, 2019

i heard a story about a backpacking couple who traveled the world, who unfortunately had this naive view of the world in wich you described, and they wound up being beheaded by ISIS.

a song that relates surprisingly well with silvers life story

No, Silver's not meant to be sympathized with, she's just here to smash Twilight and her "Improvement" methods and attempts to smithereens because she can't take "No" for an answer.

knowing this, I did a bit of a rewrite for that reason

“All my life I wanted to live a carefree joy existence with nonesuch care for work. I never liked working even back then, no matter how important it was, or how much money I could make, that was not my concern, after all, I was only five.

But my parents who a bloodline of great nobles and geniuses, wanted to rid me of such thoughts and insisted I join their laboratory and become a scientist like they were.

So they began to drill me, work me, enslave me like a dog, all day and night, but still, they didn't convince me.

So being the nutty professors they were, they took to experiments, they hooked me into a machine intended to alter my brainwaves and change my way of thinking.

so without a second thought or test, They put me onto a metal chair and begin to stick those goddamn electrodes in me. to them, i seemed nothing more than a lab rat.

they switched it on and instantly I was overcome with a shockwave of electromagnetic currency, I couldn’t even scream that's how powerful it was, it was there the wires began to short out and the whole machine went kablooey, all that was left was me and pieces of scattered schrapnel. how I managed to come outta there alive let alone uninjured ill never know.

the dust settles and all I remember was My head felt as if a ton of bricks had landed on it.

nevertheless, The experiment seemed to work. I could no longer think the way I used to-- imaginative, playful, I didn’t even seem to like it anymore.

I felt a great urge that compelled me to buckle down and work, but deep down I still didn’t like it, if anything I resented it more than ever.

Worse than that, those currents and waves altered my body in a horrific way, into a state that slowly made me weaker, harder to lift my limbs up, my insides ached constantly, and I had constant strokes and seizures. one time I had a heart attack so bad that my heart seemed to burst through my pelt!

I had to replace these forelegs with robotic limbs JUST TO MANAGE!!!

…All this would very well have killed me if it weren’t for my parent’s elixir, untested, of course.

the medicine barely keeps me going, and it still brings me great rage and misery either from the bottle, or the fact that I have to take it just to keep going! it, therefore, compels me to hate and loathe everything from work, to play, to life itself!

After my very first dose, I went as mad as they were, I turned on the ones who had ruined my life before it could be started. with one blast of my horn, they were no more, from there I destroyed they’re life’s work, so enraged I hardly thought to use my horn, primal instincts kicked in”


Twilight gasped, at the fact that Silver killed her own parents, and no pony ever knew.

The two mad scientists had created a workaholic, life-loathing monster!


Silver continuex.


“with no trace of my crime and no reason to stay, I left home."

I started a laboratory in order to recreate the elixir my parents made. I needed to take it at least once a day or the attacks would kill me!

no potion could cure me No doctor could ail me, and no faith or bond or unity could bring salvation to my pre-damned soul. i can't even kill myself because my mind won't let me.

so I just kept on working, and building, making more money, running from myself and everything else, until finally, I have the empire that stands.

How I loathe and despise it all!

this is not my kingdom, this is not my empire, this is not my legacy, it is the runoff of psychotic parents with more magic than common sense

I was robbed of my dignity, my pride, my dreams, and my happiness! All for THEIR goals and THEIR legacy

and you know its funny, had they not have broken me the way they did, I might've actually pulled up my bootstraps and got a job, but ill never know because they never gave me a chance!


…so now it has to come to an end”

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