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Cyndaquil


"From the moment I picked your book up until I laid it down, I was convulsed with laughter. Someday I intend reading it." Groucho Marx

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In the future, Cadence Arranges the birth of a child, biologically identical to Shining Armour. On his twentieth year she goes to meet him.

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Comments ( 15 )

Holy shit this is starting out good. Keep it coming!

Hmm, this leaves me wanting to know what happens next.

First, Fertility Ship was absolutely hilarious and pure genius.

Second, please do write more soon, this is totally bonkers and therefore brilliant :pinkiecrazy:

I couldn't but imagine Sunset being the one to listen to Cadence, though. Somehow it makes it even more hilarious to me.

Well, this is definitely an interesting start. You could use a once-over with punctuation, though. Like, I feel the last line could have been delivered better with an ellipsis:

“No...it was Twilight.”

Hmm, interesting. So Twilight's got a secret too?

Technically safe? Oh boy, this is going to get better :rainbowlaugh:

I ordered the wind to gather rose pedals [ petals ] gotta love spellcheck

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I don't see it.

Gotta love how fimfiction let's you edit after the story is already pupblished.

Oh gods this just keeps getting better and better :rainbowlaugh:

Not particularly to my taste, but jesus, this is interestingly written

Nevermind, this is exactly my taste :rainbowlaugh:

My hands were pressed together,

She's a weird pony! :pinkiecrazy:

I wonder how convoluted this is going to get... :rainbowlaugh:

Twiggles plays a LONG game :rainbowlaugh:

How has this evaded me for this long?

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