Vignette Valencia has become the Rainboom's manager and been a big help to the group. One day she asks if she can record a practice session, and suggests that they include a cowbell.
Konnichiwa, nakama no sakka! Ganbarou!
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Cool story bro, I'd give it a solid 9/10: could use more cowbell.
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I give this 10\10 🐄
This felt like it could've been an EG short.
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I know right lol.
I loved the concept but the execution felt a little wooden. If I may make a few suggestions you might want to show us how they are acting rather than just telling us the story. Like when Rarity needs calming down, describe her breathing and her expression, or when the Rainbooms are questioning the use of the cowbell show us how they look whether they are shocked, confused, or exasperated, and describe their tone of voice as sarcastic or skeptical, make us feel their emotion. Other than that nice little story with a very entertaining premise, so thank you for writing it.
In my opinion, the best use of a cowbell in a song was in Mötley Crüe’s Live Wire
*Shimmer
Loved this story but I have one complaint... Needs more cowbell.
I just gotta have more cowbell