A writer. I try to write at least... Video games are REALLY distracting though...and work...and life...Eh. Well if you have time go ahead and give my stuff a chance ^~^ I'm a pretty nice person
There are many who dislike Sunset Shimmer. Recent happenings have brought that to a head which has resulted in her death. But that's hardly the end for her.
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Inspired by reading WAY too many Isekai LN's and Manga.
This started as an experiment to try shorter chapters. I gave up on that later on.
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I find the lack of comments here to be somewhat concerning and off putting.
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Right? Like, I'm in the same boat. Comments are awesome but no one's been talking. ;_;
Interesting, going to follow to see were it takes me.
Ok, I wanna see where this goes, if only to understand this new world and Sunset's place in it.
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Yeah. I had a little block but I'm getting more worked out recently
Just found and read through this. Very well written and I can't wait to see where you take this.
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Eeey. Thanks. I'm gonna try to write more soonish. But I've just started reading steel ball run and uh... yeah. XD
But yeah. Thank you much!
Sunset, you have magic, Duh.
What’s wrong with long chapters,
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Like I say in my description of the story I was using this as a bit of an experiment in doing smaller chapters
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To be fair she is panicking and has been in a world where she didn't have magic for years.
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Fair enough,
I cannot wait for the next chapters!
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*Force lightenings the non-commenters* *Slams them against the wall*
I find their lack of comments... disturbing.
Neat!
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I can get behind your reason for the micro chapters, but if I had to guess (baseless claims incoming) they will cause fewer comments. Less to respond to and all that
Also could use a cover picture. When browsing it's really easy to just scroll right past a story without one because it might just blend in with the one above it if it's just text. Maybe the shooting star in the "past is not today" song?
I don't really know what this is but... I like it. Interested for more.
Time for Sunset to blow their minds with how much magic she can safely use
Also: not golden but... the one Ring makes an appearance?
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Ha. Wasn't intentional. But I get where you're coming from.
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Will it update more often?
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I'm trying to. my own motivation is trash
Cannot wait for update!
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Thank ya. I just need to get down to the brass tacks and just plan. Everything so far has been like... half planned.
Really getting interesting now that she isn't alone in the forest, can't wait for more!
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Thank ya, thank ya. I didn't want her stuck there alone. Can't leave her be to burn down the forest after-all
This has my full attention now I'm really curious.
Will sunset ever get a break!?
Also will she ever get the answer to who killed her?
Yay.
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A simple comment but it means the world
Huzzah, good setup, can't wait to see what happens next.
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Thank you much ^~^
Huh, interesting. Having the ability to fake magical signatures must be a useful one.
I seriously hope she gets justice.
I really want to take a look into the human world to see what's going on there
Interesting story so far. Hope to see an update in the future. Good work.
Yay!
I like it
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Thankies ^~^
Nice. I like the premise you've got here, good world building from what we've seen so far.
The magic system seems solid so far, and her training makes sense with what she's got available. She may be in a cell, but she's got food and shelter, so that's a plus. And now she's got to deal with a Fae!
The only thing I'm curious about, is why she hasn't probed deeper with her questions, or her explanations. Like, why not tell them some form of the truth, at least about the ring and cabin she found on her trek through the forest.
Also, how long has she been in a cell now? It feels like a week, maybe 9 days?
I like this so far and I look forward to seeing where you take this.
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I think I'd lean more towards a week or so. (Gotta fix that bit about two days though)
Sunset is being overly cautious right now. She's in a completely new world and she's done that once before. She doesn't want to run any risk of "You weren't supposed to be in there" or something. She's curious about a lot of things but that's part of why she wanted to learn to read. She wants to find out herself instead of making anyone suspicious with questions or if she says something she shouldn't.
As far as Maria, she wants to believe Sunset is clean. That's stopping her a little. But adjusted test should give her the answer she needs one way or another. Probably.
In all honesty it's poor writing on my part. I had to sorta force these chapters out. I might make a small chapter with Maria going over the information.
Wonder if Sunset will be able to magic up her new clothes to make them softer
Cool awesome magic is great and all, but sometimes it's the small things in life
So the person they think is a daemon is trapped with one
Yeeeaaahhh, spirits only you can see wanting very much to make a deal with you is never a good thing for you in the long run.
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Yeah. But Sunset is smart enough to not make a deal. Probably.
Sounds like a Sprite, but the teeth point towards a more malevolent Fey then that.
Most Fey only want to "have fun" even if the joke they play on the mortal isn't fun for said mortal. Still, so far, Sunset is wise enough to not make any deals with it. Hopefully she can keep that up.
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You don't walk away a brilliant student in a magical land without learning about dangerous stuff.
Well, I think she got out of this deal with the Fae with a lot more than she risked.
Honestly, I feel like this could be a successful Isekai anime. So far, the pilot and ep. 1 have totally hooked my attention.
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Thanks for the kind words! I've honestly been thinking about it a little. I mean, you always run into Isekai where either someone from a magic world goes into one without or someone from one without goes to one with.
So why not one where someone from a magic world goes to one where the magic has completely different rules?
I've been thinking of redoing Sunset's background and shit and turning it into an actual webnovel or whatever they call it. But FIRST I have to actually WRITE a story for y'all. So that's WAAAAY on the backburner as far as ideas go.
Thanks again for your words ^~^
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you should do that the only story that i can think of that seems similer or your story brings to mind in a weird movie i remeber about a guy from earth that goes to mars and gains the ability to jump absurdly high (i might have imagind it but maby not)
We rather like that idea, creating a fake magical signature is an idea we haven't heard before.
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That does sound familiar.
But yeah. I want to but I need to ensure I FINISH this first instead.
Great to see story updated! Sunset is showing alot of control over herself in this new world. I like this side of Sunset as it shows her character evolution.
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Yeah. She's drawing on the strength that she used when first thrown into a new world and drawing on the experiences she'd learned from two worlds.
You know what they say