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SleeplessBrony


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This is honestly the last thing I was expecting.

I probably need to read it, considering I've read most of the rest of your work.

Having read it... my sentiment remains the same.

....
meh.

Good work nonetheless.

1069576
'meh'?? :rainbowhuh:

I think you're dreadfully misspellin' 'whee'! :ajsmug:

1069630
I'm just not that big on clop right now.

Ahh, far to rushed...but hey I suppose it is just the first part of a story.

*clears throat. That said, was a good start, and I shall track this story, for reasons of curiosity.

OH! Fun Fact: I found out female horse can breed with Griffons (according to our legends anyway). The hybrids are called Hippogryphes (basically they look the same, but have a horses body in the back instead of the lion body).

Quality fic. Would read again.

Oh god, I had to stop having dinner because I was laughing too much, and now my face hurts.

10/10 will read again, brb

ee, mindfuck...
good work btw

1069639
"I'm just not that big on clop right now."
....sorry, im tired

1069685
it's a speed fic, he has to finish a full story in 90 min or so, that kind of quick, so of course it was rushed.
and i don't think there are going to be more pieces of this specific story-line, it's a compilation, meaning that there is a going to be a bunch of rushed clop-fics with no relation to each other. (awesome in other words!:rainbowwild:)

Pffffffft hahahaha brilliant

A collection of mature peieces? What is mature about getting off to ponies fucking?
written by prompt? So many people use that phrase and I have no idea what it means.
'Written by prompt.' WHat is that?:eeyup::twilightoops::raritydespair::pinkiesick::pinkiesmile::rainbowlaugh::fluttercry::flutterrage::ajsmug::applecry::coolphoto:

1069807
That's why I am tracking... the idea of a 90 minute written story sounds interesting! =p

1070044It's just a basic idea for the story, in this case Hearts and Hooves day, with sex involved.:rainbowderp:

1069807It's actually only sixty minutes, but yeah, that's it.

I need to do some speed fic stuff. Good practice.

Always gets me with the cursing. I am so relieved he never uses buck. It makes it so damn funny.

Damn, it's like a s'mores; it doesn't fill you up but the flavor is so rich... Well done! :yay:

1069630
Hear, hear! :eeyup:

I believe this sums up my feelings of this story: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2qHJ-xcMQ7Y
It sure was entertaining, all the same.

You're definitely at your best with the long, buildup-y stories, but this is still pretty good for a 90 minute speedfic! A little sad it wasn't longer, but I guess that wasn't the point. ^^'

1070903
im pretty sure it's 90 min, at least for this one. reason:
"Time: 90 minutes" is what it says in the beginning of the "first" chapter

1072646Good point, missed that. But the site itself has sixty minute time limit for it's stories.

1072999
They allowed ninety minutes just for that prompt. Usually, it's sixty minutes.

War

1073048
Love that last line man, I hope you do a Soarin X Spitfire sexty minute ponies story in the future.

*clears throat authoritatively*
BRILLIANT!:pinkiehappy:

"Fuck. Hearts. And Hooves. Day."
Best AJ line I've ever heard XD

that ending, didnt saw it coming XD





also please put Spike in the "Fum-Times" with the girls too, he needs love too ya know?

pinkandblueandpinkandblueandpinkandblueandpinkandblueandpinkandblueandpinkandblueandpinkandblue

totally not safe for work "what a mane 6 orgy may look like" PORN

I like it.
I also note the 3rd person past tense. Playing with style?

Totally random: About the "bestiality", it'd actually be "xenophilia", since it is with a sentient race, not an animal :P
Overall, it was quite amusing though. Characters was IC enough to be enjoyable :derpytongue2:

So may I introduce to you
The act you've known for all these years,
Sgt. Luna's Lonely Hearts Club Band.

What I thought when I saw the title. I somehow expected the story to somehow make a Beatle's reference.


But overall, an excellent speed fic. Too bad you couldn't continue where the story left off.

Funny, silly, sexy, and fun once more. Sleepless, you never disappoint~ :heart:

It's always fun, seeing new updates to these types of stories, it's kind of like a mystery bag (or, blind bag, if you will), which two ponies will be writhing in pleasure for you today? I was already somewhat happy that Twilight was the first pony to be featured, so I was busily trying to guess who the partner might be (considering that the Mane 6 tag was the only tag present at time of reading). Imagine my glee when was shown a Cheerilee... yeah I'm not too good at the Zecora stuff. Still, I knew I was in for a ride.

I have to say, this was hot. The descriptions, the setting, the... activities, extremely well detailed, and extremely well done, though that may just be my love for the ship talking, not to mention the blood may or may not have drifted back to my brain just yet, being needed... elsewhere. Still, it was an enjoyable clop one-shot, with a good laugh at the end.

Well done!

I love the way you write these two. Sleepless!Cheerilee is the best Cheerilee, especially when she's seducing and fucking the hell out of Twilight Sparkle. Gotta say, as hot and well done as most of this is, what I really liked was that bit at the end with Twilight sitting there with her mane all mussed up and looking sheepish because I can see it perfectly. It's just so in-character that it forms a picture in my mind. Nicely done, particularly for a sixty minute speedfic.

1314102 hahahaha you just make laugh xD

Guys! Guys!

“Cheerilee!” Twilight snapped up, the spell slightly broken.

He wrote in past tense!

Forcing an apologetic smile.

Well... mostly. And that one could be called a participial phrase adjunct to a complete past-tenes sentence that was written without the rest of the sentence for sylistic purposes... So, yeah.

And grats on 1k watchers :)

1324551

Caught me! I went over time on this one, and I'm pretty sure the reason was how often I had to go back and re-do sentences in past tense. I don't know what it is, but present is just my thing now, I guess.

I laughed out loud when you cut to the hospital. I really shouldn't read your stuff at work... :rainbowlaugh:

Nurse Redheart just sighed and shook her head.
“Again?”

Laughed like an idiot at that.

I can't believe I never remembered to read this one!

Spike had been sent away, tasked with some meaningless errand.

Downvoted so fucking hard.

“You could always hook up with Spike,” Rainbow Dash said, snorting into her glass. A few other members of their club snickered.
Rarity glared long and hard at the pegasus. “Aren’t you the one into bestiality? How closely related are griffons and ponies, anyway?”

I wish so badly I could downvote again. Well, thanks for promising clop and providing it while leaving me in a worse mood than before. :ajbemused:

Different kind of plunge, there. Nice to see some more writing from your corner of the woods, by the way.

The first story was a bit random, but the second and third felt more solid in the Sleeplessbrony cannon like they were side chapters from the main stories so I find them more enjoyable.

2573519 so your legit reason for down voting is because there's no spike in the first chapter and because a character it didn't had underage sex with a kid, not to mention that non of the stories had anything to do with him.........

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