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DiveBomb 41014

Joined March 2012
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    DiveBomb's Stories (4)

    • Treasure in the West
      Braeburn and Daring Do team up to find Cunning the Colt's lost and forgotten treasure.

      72,800 words · 7,800 views · 813 likes · 9 dislikes
    • Colt of the West
      Sequel to Treasure in the West
      119,455 words · 6,165 views · 621 likes · 11 dislikes
    • Broken
      Rainbow Dash is haunted by old feelings, but that is the least of Ponyville's worries.
      61,946 words · 2,273 views · 138 likes · 9 dislikes
    • Heroism
      Rainbow Dash walks the dark path of heroism.
      22,799 words · 590 views · 67 likes · 3 dislikes

    [Sequel to Treasure in the West] Braeburn was once a simple, humble farmer; not the type of pony one would look at twice. But a little over a year ago, all of that changed. Before then, he hadn't met the pony of his dreams. Before then, he hadn't discovered his lineage and new-found talent. Before then, he hadn't been prepared for the adventure that he was about to embark on. Now all the cards are on the table, and not just his life. Join Braeburn and Daring Do in this high-action conclusion to the Riflepony Series as they struggle with not only a new quest, but with fate as well. Old enemies have returned, and have formed a fearsome alliance. In the midst of chaos and absolute danger, Braeburn might have to break his one and only rule, as the new Colt of the West.

    Proofread by JohnPerry and RenaTurnip

    First Published
    4th Sep 2012
    Last Modified
    27th May 2013

    Comments ( 667 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Sequel? Yes please!

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Bilbo baggins

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I was wondering why this wasnt in my notifications but then i realized i wasnt watching you

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This is definitely going to be good.

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    OMG It'S FINALLY HERE!!! EEEE!!! :pinkiehappy:

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This is looking GOOOOOOOOD :pinkiehappy:

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Happy Days are here again. Praise the almighty flying spaghetti monster!:ajbemused::heart::twilightoops::pinkiesad2::flutterrage::rainbowdetermined2::trixieshiftright::rainbowkiss::raritydespair:

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #9 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh shit...

    I. HATE. CLIFFHANGERS.

    God I just know this is going to be good! Can't wait for more!

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Been looking forward to this :pinkiehappy:

    Already off to an exciting start - more, more! :yay:

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Aww yeah! :rainbowdetermined2:

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Heres some western tunes for ye

    Also Applejack acting all western

    FInally OMG i fricking love western!:rainbowkiss:

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I'm wanted, (WAAAN-TED!) Dead or alive!

    God damn this is gonna be so good.  It's obvious what you do for a living, DB.  :rainbowwild:

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Yyyyyeeeeeeeessssss!

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Aerial Ace nice name.

    Also dat cliffhanger!

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Welp, that took even less time than I would have suspected to hit the box.

    And to concur with the fanbase: DAT ROMANCE TAG.

    #19 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #20 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh shii..

    Also, Aerial Ace is best filly.

    #21 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    One this is going to be awesome!

    #22 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    That chapter title reminds me of The Dark Knight Rises. "He's a war hero. This is peacetime." Welp, not anymore it isn't. :pinkiecrazy:

    #23 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    ... I think "oh snap" may be an appropriate feeling for the end of this chapter. Although I can safely admit that the exclamation I made aloud was a little more explicit than that.

    #24 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    part of me can't help but wonder if Aerial Ace might have a more personal reason for asking about the Colt of the West.

    update soon, please?

    #25 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Sequel!  Screw the Read Later, this goes directly to tracking.

    conclusion to the Riflepony Series
    :pinkiegasp: ...series?  There's more than just this and Treasure?

    #26 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    omygodomygodomygod!!!. I loved the 1st one and now thers a sequel?

    :pinkiehappy:

    #27 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    moar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

    #28 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Just read the last chapter, and the only thing that comes to mind is: "Well shit."

    -Minty

    #29 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Slower-paced, longer story?

    Another Western?

    Long-awaited sequel to Treasure in the West?

    Braeburn/Daring Do?

    Count me in.

    And I have some interesting premonitions about the directions that this story could take...

    I shall just leave it at that.

    Plus, some music that I thought would be fitting.

    #30 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Got no checkbook, got no bank.

    Still I'd like to express my thanks,

    I've got the sun in the morning and the moon at night.~

    And now, a sequel to Treasure in the West, too.

    I love you.

    #31 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Well now, I am happy this is up!  And shocked that its mere existence hasn't already catapaulted it to EqDaily.  But it will find its way home in due time.

    In the mean time, I'm going to start what I didn't finish and-wait, wut?

    Bah, I'm going to finish reading the first chapter of the prequel, and then I'll start here.  Four chapters should be up by then.  :rainbowlaugh:

    ...

    I really should've done that before I posted here, huh?

    :facehoof:

    #32 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #34 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 23h ago · · ·
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    OMG it is finally here   insta fav... and who the buck has braeburn at gunpoint, they obviously dont know that brae brae has back up

    #35 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 23h ago · · ·
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    >>1217052

    :facehoof:

    And, you know, getting the first post and exclaiming that you've gotten such, I'm quite sure, is a temporary ban.

    #36 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 22h ago · · ·
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    hooray! let the games begin!

    #37 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 21h ago · · ·
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    Glorious!

    #38 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 20h ago · · ·
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    I'll have to read it later

    #39 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 19h ago · · ·
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    AW COME ON!!!!!

    #40 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 19h ago · · ·
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    I haven't read this yet, but I had to tell you, that was an excellent description! Really pulled me in!

    #41 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 19h ago · · ·
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    Oh, hell yeah.  By all that is holy, this could quite possibly be the sequel I've most anticipated of all time.  The first was excellent...and the Colt of the West promises to live up to its predecessor, and more.  Get this shit onto EQD, stat!  The world must know.

    #42 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 18h ago · · ·
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    A Sequel? To one of my favorite stories? I'm IN! :rainbowkiss:

    #43 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 17h ago · · ·
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    The Color of Apples series and yours, good sir, are probably the best stories i've ever read. I love the way this sequel is looking and it's only the first chapter! I love to imagine my self as the protagonist in really good, descriptive stories. This is one of those stories. Well played. MOOOOOOAR

    #44 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 17h ago · 1 · ·
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    this is sure going to be one hell of a ride... MOAR!!!!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!! I WANNA SEE DARING AGAIN!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

    #45 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 15h ago · · ·
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    >>1217831 heres a update for ya:

    #46 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 15h ago · · ·
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    Please...continue...

    Can't.....survive........without....................more.....:raritydespair:

    #47 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 12h ago · · ·
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    Peace in Appleloosa!

    Aaaaaaand it's gone.

    #48 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 12h ago · · ·
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    Epic!

    #49 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 10h ago · · ·
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    *insert chorus of angels singing "Halejula"*

    #50 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 4h ago · · ·
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    How did I know Coltwell would be involved somehow?

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