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  • T King of Diamonds

    Book 2 of The Ambassador's Son
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  • E Buck to the Future

    Scootaloo is a small pegasus with big dreams, one dream is to be even more famous than Rainbow Dash
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  • E Friendship is Optimal - Firewall

    Sometimes the land of Equestria, under Celest-AI, needs to be protected. Pity they got me. Now, if only I can figure out these pony boots and this headset...
    39,559 words · 1,635 views  ·  154  ·  5
  • T Dexterity

    Spike the dragon, now an anatomical forensics expert, comes back to visit Ponyville, and discovers Rarity is in need of help with a troublesome client. The gentle dragon-shaped pony is only too pleased to assist.
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  • E Friendship is Optimal - Yggdrasil

    When you're an immortal alicorn, you need hobbies. When you're an immortal Archon alicorn, your hobbies are worlds.
    1,439 words · 1,684 views  ·  110  ·  4
  • E The Midnight Run

    Some say Earth ponies have no magic... but that isn't true. They are the secret custodians of nature
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  • E Nightfall at Sweet Apple Acres

    Morning turns to day, turns to night. The sun sets on us all, even the Elements of Harmony.
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  • E Midnight Run - A Carpet of Stars

    Twilight is an Alicorn, and can no longer partake in the Midnight Run. But that does not mean an end to her mystical journeys.
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  • 7w, 4d
    September (cough) state of (hack) the (urgh, snot, splort, groan) writer

    I've been sick for the last three weeks. Frelling magnificent.

    6 comments · 141 views
  • 10w, 4d
    that third thing: c25k

    Told you I was scatterbrained... I finally remembered what that third thing was that I've been doing. It's called 'c25k'.

    C25K stands for 'couch to 5k', as in 'couch potato to 5 kilometer runner'. It's supposed to lead you from being a fat slob sitting in front of the television to be able to run for 30 minutes - or roughly five kilometers - in about nine weeks.

    I've just started week 3, but I've been doing this for about five weeks... blame school holidays ending, trips to Estonia and some really shitty weather for making me repeat (not abandon or postpone) weeks 1 and 2. I have to say though, I think it works. It's scary when you start a new week, and the first attempt at each new week is always worse than the one before it... but I'm doing okay. I'm running the distance.

    If you've ever wanted to get into shape, but just don't know how, then this is the easiest, cheapest way to get into shape I've found yet: all you need is an mp3 player and a pair of sneakers. And clothes - most people look at you oddly if you're not dressed.

    Follow this link and download the podcasts, do what the nice lady says and you'll be on your way in no time.

    6 comments · 84 views
  • 10w, 5d
    Oh mah gawd, it's alive! It's ALLIIVVEEE! (muahahaaa)

    Yah yah, I know: long time no see.

    Well, I thought I should kind of fix that. 'Kind of' because I'm kind of scatterbrained at the moment, don't really have the time to dedicate to a proper entry and a third reason which totally helps explain things. I have been busy in life. The good sort of busy, I guess, which leads to not much writing but doesn't lead to horrible depression and ennui. I've not really had much time to interact here, so... I'm alive. And writing - slowly.

    When it comes out, out and about chapter 10 will be the last. I hope it's as awesome as it is in my head...

    And when it comes out, king of diamonds chapter 28 won't be the last... but it will also be awesome.

    Promises, promises, I know, but almost one thousand people can't be that wrong, can they? Yes, that's right, almost a thousand people think I'm kinda awesome! I'm shocked. I'm also hoping that it's a modicum of talent and not merely having been here forever.

    So what have I been doing when not-writing? We-eelll... I've been coding. It might be going somewhere. And once I finish (actually, once it's 'good enough') then I might use what I've learned on something else. Something writing-y related.

    Stay tuned.

    So, what've you all been up to?

    10 comments · 113 views
  • 19w, 2d
    Crystal Fair Con: Day 1: 72 hours remain

    2 comments · 129 views
  • 19w, 5d
    Con day zero: 96* hours remaining

    So: Thursday was the first day of the con for me, same as it was for everyone on staff who wasn't actively involved in any real pre-setup.

    Thursday (super early!) saw Tabitha and Kevin arrive. I believe the flight went relatively well, but at something like 14 hours plus, it was exhausting as heck and the pair understandably needed to decompress and get some energy back. They did that by soldiering through the jetlag like real troopers and enjoying themselves some Helsinki in summer. The only stories I could really tell at this point would be second hand, so I won't embellish - they had fun and that was pretty much that.

    By the way, have I said yet that Tabitha is super-super-nice? And that so is Kevin? Because they both are. Honest. I've seen pissy diva's and pushy little monsters but Tabitha is so awesome and a lot of fun to be around, and Kevin knows his stuff when it comes to the little details that really round out the experience for the guests. If I ever get to do this again, thanks to the little tricks he just flat out does at the flick of a wrist (hoof? I guess he's an honorary pony, though - without being mean, honest - I'd see him more as a sharp-eyed griffon!) I'll be better next year.

    I didn't get to meet Tabitha on Thursday, and to be honest other than walking to a bunch of hotels I didn't care about because I didn't really need to know where they were and seeing a bunch of people I would come to care about but at that moment didn't (no offence, but on Thursday everyone was a stranger in person!) and faffing around at the airport with the sorts of minor schedule mishaps that can occur when Finnair (I think, don't quote me on that) loses an entire effin' plane's worth of luggage, everything went pretty well.

    My target, Anneli, made her way to Helsinki fine, but remember when I mentioned about losing all the luggage?


    You may have seen her joyful reunion with her bright yellow suitcase on twitter from the Friday, because her belongings had a mini vacation of their own in kocha bamba...

    I could have seriously missed Thursday, but I will totally agree that it was good preparation for what was to come...

    *yeah, I know, the actual time the con had wasn't that long, but what'm I gonna do, huh?

    2 comments · 90 views
  • ...

A noble earth-pony family, fallen somewhat on hard times, is killed in a mining accident. They leave behind a single male heir, who is in sore need of a guardian, and of protection. Celestia takes the young pony under her wing and delivers him not to ponies - not earth, unicorn or pegasus - but to a dragon, an ambassador, an old friend of hers.

Playing a game which may just be deadly to the uninformed, the dragon decides that the one path open to him to ensure the safety of his charge and to carry out his sworn duty, is to adopt.

First Published
13th Dec 2011
Last Modified
15th Apr 2012

Nice story, let's see where it goes...

Dragonforce based story? That's new.

Haven't really read the chapter yet but if you don't mind me asking, what have you done with your enter key? If it doesn't appear soon, I'm calling the cyber police.

Well it's a good idea overall, this is my first fanfic in a [very/i] long while i've read with OC's as a major character. I tend to avoid them out of biasness and the last time it did not end well, or start well, or have a particulary good middle section. Infact i read it and i was rather :derpyderp2: to it so with all that asiade let's look at this from the begining and see how well it fits together. The answer, SLOW DOWN.

You write suberply and everything flows wonderfully together. You are also one of the only people i have ever met who seem to know how to phrase dialouge like in a book on the internet so props off to you for that. I'd like a bit more of a description of the Ambassador and of Chip themselves but my biggest complaint is that you have so much happening at once in this chapter and it all goes by very quickly. I did enjoy reading it and will be continuing to do so as later chapters appear.  


you know its good when its 5.0 in 7 rstings :pinkiegasp:

goodjob sir

A role reversal? A dragon rearing a pony foal? I love the concept and the execution seems sound so far. I'll keep an eye open for opportunities to quote Dragonforce, by the way :p


I do intend to slow the pace down, right down. The initial hectic few scenes are to get things rolling. The board is set up, the opening moves of all players are standard and well known... but for one.

Wow i like how this is going so far :pinkiesmile:

and now all it needs is carpet bombing and more cow bell and it will become complete :pinkiehappy:

Love it. was a little worried going into it. just because i'm a little wary of OC stories. but this was definitelyworth it.

lovethe dragon. i won't say the 'chess' thing is overdone nowadays, but i will say there are too many charaacters who use it, and frankly, don't do it well. this is definitely NOT the case here. X3. love it, and i love just his characterization. the back and forth between cold/calculating and warm/caring (or at least thats what i see it as) was executed well.

definitely gonna track this. X3


It's very easy to overdo the whole "trololo it's all a game of chess" - I really don't wish to rub the analogy in anypony's face so you won't hear too much about it. I would rather treat it as the ambassador himself treats it - he knows scheming plans are afoot, but he doesn't quite know what, therefore he does his best to prepare by sheltering his new charge the best way he sees fit.

Liking it thus far, will be tracking this one for sure

Please Sir, Can I have some more?:fluttercry::applecry::raritycry:

Another excellent chapter, the skydiving bit was hilariously awesome :twilightsmile:

Pardon me, but is there really a need to call him a dragon?

Yeah yeah, your story and all, but he is technically an Earth Pony. Even the blind could

see that. Other than that, I look forward to the next chapter.


This ish just got funny


i think that's just the actual dragon being a troll to everyone else, that or draconic pride are my guesses. I just treat it like pinkie pie and roll with it. :pinkiehappy:

the hideous spectre of ‘bedmane’ :rainbowlaugh:

this is a interesting story, not sure if i've read one before where a dragon was raising someone of a different species before... not that i remember at least

Interesting idea with the multi-race school. I guess when you live in the boundary-lands of Equestria you get used to it.

Also, I agree with ForlanceAbice, it seems weird to call him a dragon, but I'm sure you have your reasons.

Guess i'll leave a comment on this one too. X3


anyway, love it. definitely was worth tracking. gonna say i like the whole, Sharptooth referring to Chip as a 'dragon.' i'm not gonna try to give reasons for it, its your story. but i like it. it makes Sharptooth a little deeper in character.

second(third?) best line of the whole story, "he licked his muzzle clean and devoured the rest in a bloodthirsty orgy of gastronomical destruction" jsut saying.

looking forward to more.


Look, everyone knows that is an earth pony, but when a huge flying armored fire breathing killing machine with diplomatic immunity shows up with a kid in tow and tells you they are his kid, and thus a dragon, you generally don't belabor the point with him.

That said, I do like this premise, and the execution thus far. Seeing more of this will brighten my day.

I tried to click on chapter 3...Then I literally yelled out FU:yay:K Thanks for writing such a good chapter!

Welp, one more thing added to my tracked list...

Not bad, hhowever I didnt feel the dragonforce song as a title as it didn't rly fit the story, but then again that's just me.

Makes me wanna make a story about a gambling pony who finds love, but never put him in a casnio and call the first chapter "Ace of Spades":rainbowlaugh:

Toy Story references, you just have to love them.

:pinkiehappy: Wow! :pinkiehappy:

I love the idea, and the execution - and the "calling Chip a dragon" thing is really excellent - not just for Sharptooth's character, but for Chip's as he grows up. Can't wait to see more.

:twilightsmile: :raritystarry: :pinkiesmile: :rainbowlaugh: The ponies approve.

And Chip discovers the game "Kerplunk".

Mind you, without Tess and the Foley's transporters it's a limited version of the game.

Ahhhhh :fluttercry: Sharpie sounds like Dumbledore to me :raritycry:


I like being a bit facetious with my titles, so you'll have to stretch for the meaning. It's not at all because I suck at them. :scootangel:


Semantics, technicalities, contracts, inheritance... Chip lives in a magical world, Sharpie is a powerfully magical creature. He has his reasons.


Clothing store spam? That's a new one.



>>67318>>67528It probably signifies acceptance and belonging.  Simply put, Sharptooth is declaring that he views Chip as not just a member of his family, but as his own son, and not just as an outsider or add-on

This is definitely looking interesting.  I can't wait for more.:pinkiehappy:

I love it Midnight. Can't wait to see what happens.

Get more out soon please.

Track and 5*.

Well then. My only real complaint would be that this moves pretty fast, at least the first chapter does. Mostly, I have no earthly idea why Sharptooth would so willingly and whole-heartedly adopt an orphaned pony just like that. I expect that this will be gone into later, however, so benefit of the doubt and all.

But curses, you went the foal route, and that's instant like. :| I mean, Chip turning around three times before lying down? ADORABLE. And then there was the flying lesson.


"Feel it in your wings!"


Fantastic. Also, Frostpepper is a GREAT name. Also FUK U FUK U FUK U

>>68464 eh, spam takes many forms though, yeah, don't see that too often

oh well, one less waste of text :rainbowdetermined2:

also the first spam i've seen on this site


muwahahaaa, looks like I nyxed your plans to hate it then :rainbowlaugh:

...and I almost wish I hadn't used Frostpepper because yeah, great name (for once).


saw the same thing on another story, same account. I think I need to tell Knighty...

This story is so cute!


It sucks because I have that  on a blog post (not that anyone reads those) but yoy can't delete comments on a blog post.

*you (meaning I)

But anyways great story, I am really looking forward to reading more.

Confound these dragons, they drive me to feelings.

I do quite love this story and would submit y request for moar posthaste.

That was an awesome chapter, I for one think that treating chip like a dragon is a very interesting concept and will make for a great story.

Lol i was hoping he would start breathing fire XD

Oh Midnight, you and your 'being good at writing', whatever that is.

Another wonderful job.

This story sure stands out from others, can't wait to see where this leads.

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