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When Rainbowdash suddenly gets curious after viewing an ancient ruins in the Everfree forest, she finds herself on a journey that she never thought she would have to face. This story brings both Fluttershy and Rainbowdash on a journey that will change there lives forever, when cut off from friendship, what must they do? Keep hope that they will restore it, and themselves.

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You know it's Rainbow Dash, right? It's not one word. Also, Pegasus isn't capitalized, as it's not the name of an individual, but a race. After all, we don't write Human Being like that, do we?

Thank you for your feedback, it seems i have many negative votes. i would greatly appreciate anyone who votes this negatively to post a comment on why, for i am open to fix things. :pinkiehappy:

"Fluttershy! Good to see you!" Rainbow Dash exclaimed.
"You tw-" Fluttershy was cut off by Rainbow Dash

I read that and thought Flutters was going to say "You twat!" :rainbowlaugh: sorry had bad thoughts in am head :rainbowlaugh:

Anyway great chapter, RD and Flutters are 'the chosen ones' DUN DUN DUUUUNNN

Hahah! now that you say it i can see that :rainbowlaugh: Thanks for the comment, made me laugh.

Excellent chapter!:heart:

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I've noticed your spelling Rainbow Dash like Rainbowdash

It's two words not one

Oh pony feathers! I have been told both. that its two words, and that its one.... i'm going to keep it as one for now, and if people find that really bad in the future ill go back and space the words and capitalize the D about several hundred times. XD

Also, return of the pictures! soon. can you wait? i cannot!

Well... I guess it's okay to write both ways - I mean to write Rainbow Dash or Rainbowdash. But... actually I like spelling Rainbow Dash more.
(Great, I can't understand what I'm talking about... that's wierd. :derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpyderp1::derpyderp2:)

Great fic, I really like it!

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