When you were growing up as the only human in Equestria you knew you were different. With your canine fangs, these wrigglers you have on your hoof and being an omnivore, you gave up on having friends. Until one alicorn change it all.
I might switch it to third person depending on the story's perspective or you guys' opinion. Cover art is done by me.
5/26/2019 Holy moly I did not expect this story to be featured on the same day, thank you so much!
3/6/2020 Sweet apples it's featured again! Thank you guys so much!
Chapters (4)
It be alright.
I’m watching. I did like the touch of a human using ponyisms, seeing as that’s how they were raised.
I can tell that you’re writing is a little bit more relaxed and some other people. I at least enjoyed reading at least a bit of it. Good start!
Not a bad start
Good concept, but definitely needs editing
I am enjoying this story as of now. Needs some small edit. I don't consider myself any better at writing. I don't have much say in this.
> "The THICCEST tree"
Dang, that tree got curves!
Those dudes bullying Anon better get their comeuppance when Celestia finds out. It's not just some kid getting bullied, it's a political attack on Celestia herself. Gold Platinum's family would at the very least get stripped of their nobility and banished from Canterlot, if not from all of Equestria.
Enjoyable! Needs a bit of editing to tighten up some grammar but I’m looking forward to see you continue this!
This... this is good. I love it. Hope to see more!
Sweet mother, sweet mother, send your child unto me, for the sins of the unworthy must be baptized in blood and fear.
Not bad. I rather like it, and very well done.
it always floors me just how nasty people can be when they stop seeing someone as a person. When I was in middle school I observed as a group of kids taunted a severely bullied boy as he was drowning in the local springs. Wasn't even a group of bullies doing it. It was just a group of average nobodies. The regular kids. Many at the school had stopped seeing the bullied kid as even human.
Taught me a valuable lesson. (I was going to say "Deep down, people are animals." But we all know that isn't true because its not deep down at all, its right there at the surface.)
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"Knowledge is power and power corrupts, so study and be evil." - Reykan
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Did ya help the guy that was bullied?
This is a really great Anon story and definitely different. Please keep going!
I always thought ponies were dumb. with so many animals already cataloged including other creatures such as minotaur and griffins I thought that whoever found it would see that your hands look like claws or paws.
The story is very good anyway=.)
Is this going to continue?
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Probably not.
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Please mark it as hiatus or cancelled then.
Congratz, you got featured again.
What a nice story, makes me feel all warm and fuzzy. Great work on your first story, keep up the good work! :)
This chapter could do some proofreading.
I just want to say that this chapter could use some proofreading.
I like it I probably will add it to my compendium if it gets completed of if it cant be finished in an hour
P.S. Yay a story with Second best pony.
Damn, yesterday I looked through all the fics in my tracking list and I actually thought it would be neat if this one got updated.
This chapter is a much higher quality than the previous. I was honestly finding it a bit hard to read, but continued because the concept was interesting. But this chapter improved heaps. Everything flowed well, and things made sense. Keep up the good work!
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So it's alive?
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In between finals and other obligations the update will be slow. The direction of the story will be different but I don't plan to drop it anytime soon.
YAY! New chapter!
Last seen Mar 26th, 2021
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You mean "your shift is almost over right?"
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