At the bottom of Stable 10, the great generator that has kept its residents alive for centuries is beginning to fail. As solutions are sought within, one pegasus sets her sights on the very ponies who built - and possibly sabotaged - her home.
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Nicely done! I am idly curious how many caps fresh produce would have to be worth. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Thanks! It's looking like I'm settling into a pace of a chapter a week, so it shouldn't be terribly long. I'll keep those apples in mind!
Why do I have but one upvote to give? Interesting angle with introducing Ghoulbow Dash in the first act. Let's see where this goes.
Rainghoul Dash still angery at Spitfire.
Wait... This is an alternate Universe. Why is this an alternate Universe. I don't get the need.
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Making this a standalone universe gives me some creative liberty that sticking to specific canon doesn't. I didn't like the prospect of writing a story that would be tied to another's canon, especially one that has been so thoroughly explored as Kkat's FO:E.
Writing Renewal on a blank slate allows me to reimagine the events preceding the war, as well as creating a postwar setting a little more tailored to the story I'm telling.
Is it bad that I actually shredded a tear when I found out the ghoul was RD? Either way A good Start :p
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I'm glad you found that moment impactful! It means I'm doing something right!
Pity the vault doesn't have any geothermal heat to run a generator with. I hope the two of them remember to leave a note at the door as no other way of communicating has been mentioned...
I think this is the chapter that really hooked me in for the long run.
What a gut punch with rainbow and the dread from the overly nice helpful changeling
Aurora better learn fast !
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Originally, that was the plan! At the time I couldn't figure out a compelling way for a geothermal generator to fail slowly, and for the fix to be external to the Stable. Aurora got stuck with inferior technology for the plot! XD
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Glad to have you on board! Writing Blue has been one of my favorite parts of the story thus far. I'm glad you liked it too!
Holy shit. I should have guessed that was Rainbow Dash, but god damn. That sucks.
Who are you really, Roach?
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;) Keep reading and you'll find out!
Interested to see where the changling story goes. Shame people always make a different story for rainbow dash though. + I dont think stimpacks were a think in Equestria it was mainly healing potions or bandages though this comment is a little late :P
I like the introduction of Rainbow Dash here. It firmly steps away from Kkat's canon, setting things in a new direction, and introduces the character in an interesting way. I hope there's more to the ghoul she became, and not just a one-off for shock and an obligatory tie-in. I want for Blue to have stuff to do and a role to play, but I think a happy ending is probably too much to hope for. This is Fallout, after all.
Interesting decision to keep the Ministries, right down to the name. Seems like this MoA fills a slightly different role. I bet that the other ministries will keep their names, but I'm interested in seeing if their roles have changed much.
Not sure how I feel about Roach. I can't decide if he's trustworthy.
I love the differences! It's like a strange reflection of an existing world. It manages to make the familiar new. Unexpected changes could be around each corner, and I'm already imagining the interesting fates that could have befallen the Ministry Mares. I hope the differences are brave enough to stray a meaningful distance from the source.
Well done!