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Ho-LEE FUCK dude. Looking forward to reading more of this shit...
Bonus points for the accurate reaction...
GOD-FUCKING-DAMMIT!!! Now I have to wait for more...
Question; Why did he switch from being able to understand every word the ponies said to incapable of communication literally overnight?
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I appreciate your perception, though!
It will be explained. Don't worry, I've got things the way they are for specific reasons
Very nice work! You showed how difficult it can be. I can't blame Toby, it happens if the stress becomes too much. Thought, I wonder what the story behind Marietta is.
Nice work, though having a injured being imprisoned seems a bit overkill. Or did they not notice his injuries?
Can't blame him. Luna takes protocol a bit too serious
Very good so far. Nice to see someone use a uncommon car as well, seeing as I have a '65 Covair Corsa Turbo
9820421
I'd wolf-whistle for ya, but I'm depressingly lack skill in that area
He broke the 4th wall
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Hello there.
9820610
Hi! What's this about?
9820229
Same
Is this based on The Things They Carried by Tim O'Brien?
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No, he only leaned on it.
9820888
it was called battle fatigue before that
Wait a minute...... By any chance, was this inspired from the short story, "The Things They Carried" by Tim O'Brien?
Frankly, the story would be better if Toby had actually shooted the first guard, or even the pony family after freaking out. That would have been a realistic response that would justify the harsh treatment from Luna and the guard, giving the chance of exploring the personal hell of shellshocked veterans and its consequences on society.
Instead we have Lulu being an idiotic bitch for no reason: "Oh, he said his people make wars. Let's put in a cell and throw away the key."
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I was joking around with that idea.
9821346
It sure was - it was a really inspiring book.
9821349
Or maybe there's a bigger picture, and the author is aware of the temporary holes in the plot.
9820673
Indeed
9824867
That's cool!
Several days with an alien captured yet they didn´t bother trying to learn anything else from him, including his biology or what he eats.
[visible confusion]
9829752
Exactly. My. Thoughts.
It shows how dim witted ponies can be due to the isolationism from other species
For example, look at the griffin city to the east, its in shambles and yet its extremely close to baltimare and trottingham but because they dont care about neighbouring countries (?) They never notice how terrible the conditions are in said place and therefore cant help or learn about dealing with foreign species. making them xenophobic and isolationist
Also an example of xenophobia from the ponies is when zecora first appeared in ponyville, despite her equine body they still hid from her because she wasnt a pony, they hid because she was a zebra, a foreign species that they SHOULDNT have been scared of due to the high number of similarities between ponies and zebras, but they are just so xenophobic that even such simple differences in looks and accent made them hide in fear.
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Don't worry he's has the phone part wrong by three years.
Waiting game
Well, i guess Twilight and fluttershy could make him willing to speak and i am Sure rarity Making him some nice Clothes would be apprechiated by him. Pinkie would probably understand him. I am just unsure about Rainbow.
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As in holy shit, that was actually a thing?
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Yes, car phones were an actual thing, all though my facts were incorrect. Ah, well - no turning back now.
I wonder what happened after his death back on Earth, it would be interesting to know, and good work so far!
This is good.
I enjoy the story a lot so far. <3
Nice work, you truly show the conflict in Toby.
He is going to give in when one of the elements asks him to eat something. Let it at least be on his own terms that he eats not at another ponies wishes
Awesome!
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Injured or not he’s still an unknown and this Equestria seems more Xenophobic than usual. So he’s potentially a threat. But it IS immoral to do so without at least treating said injuries.
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EXactly, medical treatment should be first. What would you have of a prisoner dying of his injurires in his cell?
9820303
Magic horse land, logic need not comply.
Nice!