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GOD-FUCKING-DAMMIT!!! Now I have to wait for more...
Can't blame him. Luna takes protocol a bit too serious
He broke the 4th wall
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Hi! What's this about?
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Same
Is this based on The Things They Carried by Tim O'Brien?
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No, he only leaned on it.
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it was called battle fatigue before that
Wait a minute...... By any chance, was this inspired from the short story, "The Things They Carried" by Tim O'Brien?
Frankly, the story would be better if Toby had actually shooted the first guard, or even the pony family after freaking out. That would have been a realistic response that would justify the harsh treatment from Luna and the guard, giving the chance of exploring the personal hell of shellshocked veterans and its consequences on society.
Instead we have Lulu being an idiotic bitch for no reason: "Oh, he said his people make wars. Let's put in a cell and throw away the key."
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I was joking around with that idea.
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It sure was - it was a really inspiring book.
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Or maybe there's a bigger picture, and the author is aware of the temporary holes in the plot.
Thanks for the perception, though.
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Indeed
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That's cool!
adhfksaghja I LOVE THAT
FUCKING LUNA U BITCH