Headmasters do not arrange Juvenile Detention orders, judges do. It would be more realistic if the headmaster said the police would be involved, and leave it at that. In the next chapter, you could have consequences leading on from Rodney's disappearance. Or not, just my take on things.
I really like the story because it gives me fits of ANGER! Seriously am I the only one that wants to these freaking assholes!
Edit: Thank Celestia and her rainbow mane that the Principal is a fair kind man. Also that math teacher should be fired, and by that I mean set on fire.
Ok i am so suggesting this story to my friend Davis. His favorite character is flutters so he would definettly love this story. Btw your doing a great job
I'm liking this alot, please do continue
I did my best on this one, please post any errors you see. ANY!
Jadders, thanks.
Headmasters do not arrange Juvenile Detention orders, judges do. It would be more realistic if the headmaster said the police would be involved, and leave it at that. In the next chapter, you could have consequences leading on from Rodney's disappearance. Or not, just my take on things.
Oh, and keep up the good work!
Ok, I'll rewrite the part.
Ok, i Changed the part to where the headmaster contacts the court, and sends Rodney on suspension for a week.
Well done with the story I have faved this and sorry for not being able to pre read again
Im currently working on the third chapter, still need a prereader though.
Ahh these feels, so much feels... I love it
This has given me such inspiration
Also, i'm not normally one for feels, but this has just the right amount of them to make it good, not sad
A prereader you say?
1060693 Cheese, message me if your interested. Chapter 3 should be out by tonight, Im still writing it.
Out by tonight you say?! thats quick
1061577 Well, I got nothing else to do. Keep in mind, feel free to correct any mistakes.
I really like the story because it gives me fits of ANGER! Seriously am I the only one that wants to these freaking assholes!
Edit: Thank Celestia and her rainbow mane that the Principal is a fair kind man. Also that math teacher should be fired, and by that I mean set on fire.
Ok i am so suggesting this story to my friend Davis. His favorite character is flutters so he would definettly love this story. Btw your doing a great job
1117753 as soon as i'm done with my home made inter dimentional telaporter, we shall attack, brother.