Woah! I...I never saw this type of chapter coming at all! Da fuq? Flutershy being....what? Dave framed for something he never did and is now going to juvy? This is a whole ton of suprises! I can't process what's going on! Uhh, will the next chapter sbe of him in juvy or will they take place after dave getting kicked out and the 3 months of juvy? Oh and will Dave be able to find who framed him?
1099687 hehe yeah school really sucks and i'm looking forward to the next chapter. cant wait too see how Dave will tackle this i just hope that shy doesn't get hurt
(I just read the first paragraph)DAVE. YOU. HAVE. A. WITNESS! GO TO FLUTTERSHY'S COTTAGE AND SHE CAN SPEAK AGAINST THE TIP! Seriously these small things get me piss the f@#k off.
(Read Lemons) To tell you the truth I cried out of sheer anger after reading that part. Seeing Fluttershy like that made me want to break the 4th wall and rescue her myself.
Although I've been critical towards you at times, but what sets you apart from other writers is how you effectively use these tragic element like bulling, rape, etc. You got me to physically react towards these situation, and for that I say Bravo.
I got this done.. I have been loaded with school stuff.. so please forgive me.
Holy shiznits that was a...eventful chapter hope to see moar soon
1099612 Give it till saturday.. school sucks.
really crazy chapter can't wait to see more hopefully on saturday.
1100076 Yeah... I wanna write more, but i need to think on it.
Woah! I...I never saw this type of chapter coming at all! Da fuq? Flutershy being....what? Dave framed for something he never did and is now going to juvy? This is a whole ton of suprises! I can't process what's going on! Uhh, will the next chapter sbe of him in juvy or will they take place after dave getting kicked out and the 3 months of juvy? Oh and will Dave be able to find who framed him?
*reads lemons*
Anyway, next chapter looks interesting, keep it up~ (school does suck btw)
Hey, how long do you think you the story will be?
aw saturday WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
1100103
Did shy loose her verginity wtf... Noooooooo
wow, that chapter hit me in the face like a brick, can't say I saw any of that coming
.....I have no words for this......
Please tell me the rapist only shoved inside her mouth.......
1099687 hehe yeah school really sucks and i'm looking forward to the next chapter. cant wait too see how Dave will tackle this i just hope that shy doesn't get hurt
@Chapter 7
Daaahfuuuuuq???
1103470
Nope, into her "youknowwhat"
1106396
Don't say that
He doesn't know what he's taking about(reassuring myself)
I keep checking this everyday even though i should be checking every other day...
:megusta:
1107191 Its the vagina.1107382 Ill try to finish it.
I hate netorare/cuckold thats why I asked
1111293 Kk, new chapter soon.
Due to my parents, expect more delays.
1111293 Noooooo not the vag shes not a virgin anymore nooooooo
Cmon its saturday already
1112451 Dude, im sorry. I'll release it tonight, but after that, expect long post times. I got work and school...
1115659 aight
1116344 I might start a new story soon, along w/ this.
1116369 then you wont be able to complete this one.
1116430 Im gonna always continue on this one... but the next chapter will be sunday morning now, and will have like, 5000 words.
Sunday morning for me so...
1116528 Fuck.. it is here to. I was derping. ill release it tonight.
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo
1116767 Thats soon...
Not soon enough for me
(I just read the first paragraph)DAVE. YOU. HAVE. A. WITNESS! GO TO FLUTTERSHY'S COTTAGE AND SHE CAN SPEAK AGAINST THE TIP! Seriously these small things get me piss the f@#k off.
(Read Lemons) To tell you the truth I cried out of sheer anger after reading that part. Seeing Fluttershy like that made me want to break the 4th wall and rescue her myself.
Although I've been critical towards you at times, but what sets you apart from other writers is how you effectively use these tragic element like bulling, rape, etc. You got me to physically react towards these situation, and for that I say Bravo.