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heh, quite literally.
This was... Surprisingly, much better than I expected. I find myself waiting with eagerness for more.
I guess reading about DayBreaker impailing herself over and over and over again would be a dull read, but I hope more detail will go into future sex scenes, and not just a buildup to it.
Oh this was a great read, I love this story, I hope there will be more of this story. Will you show the aftermath of the submission of the zebras even show a scene with what he did there maybe they gave him a cures on him for what he did? I hope Daybreaker with add a few more plans for Shining, as her pet and have some special training for him.
By the way, if you are interested to have your own cover art for this story, I am open to commissions, here is the link to my DA page if you want to take a look at my work. Hope to hear from you soon.
https://www.deviantart.com/amalgamzaku
Oh nice chapter, it didn't expect it o go as calmly as it did, I was expecting him to subjugate an amazon princess but this I think was more interesting an allows Shining to keep some of his innocence a little longer for him. I thought the boon that he go in the end was interesting, and I wonder what will happen to him in the future when he needs it? I am sure he will have a lot of stories to tell Twily when her sees her again.
This certainly was an interesting chapter and it's good that Shining Armor didn't rape the zebra mare.
So Tarb requested this? Ok :)
Loving the story so far!
Boy toy you say?
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=j4ErmBDTOJo
You know, this chapter was lovable. Really love to see Daybreaker tease Shining and show her ruthlessness to annoying noble ponies. Likewise, Shining’s love for his zebra and his dedication to making the royal guard be a moral institution that protects others is admirable. I really love this chapter, especially since Tenpest Shadow appears
P.S: Since Blueberry Frost appear, does that mean that other guards like Blade Dancer, Cached Ire, and Hammerblow would appear either in the following chapters or on PH? Is Tempest Shadow a lover of Daybreaker?
Well, it was nice to see an update on this story again and that you went beyond just making it a clop story, but add plots, of many kind to the story, credit on you and keep up the good work.
This was a nice chapter but since Daybreaker is an empress you would have an imperial guard instead of a royal guard.
I know it’s supposed to be the gentlemanly thing to do and we’re supposed to praise him for doing it, but I can’t help but wonder if she accepted her role because of his kindness, or because she was aware of the alternative. And with how old Daybreaker is, I’d expect her to call him out on this naïveté.
I expect that Daybreaker intends for it to happen because she mind find it amusing. It's also possible that she thinks Tempest needs loosening up.
Hope this continues.
I caught that FoE reference. XD No caribou invaders in this timeline!
They probably all died of snu-snu trying to outlast her. =P
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Actually, they were... well... let's just say that since Daybreaker is far more willing to resort to physical and magical violence than Celestia, that the Caribou military didn't have much of a snowball's chance in Tartarus of even surviving initial contact.
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So, basically...
"POW! You are dead! No big surprise."
Awesome chapter worth the wait please let shining armor and mahiri adopt a baby Griffin they find in a prison cell
It's obvious Shining will survive but I wonder how this will affect Tempest. The german could be better but it's not very important.
Just found the story and I love it
Great story I'm hooked
I doubt things will end well for Slush Fund since he caused a rebellion and Daybreaker will probably make an example of him.
I snorted so hard I nearly shot my drink out my nose! I mean if you're going to be in that position you might as well own it. Lovely chapter you got here buddy, some good pacing and very snappy dialogue especially between Shining and Tempest.
Well THIS whole thing will be an interesting experience explaining to her on how things went down.
Keep it going don't give up
This is a great story I hope you continue with something
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So what you're saying is the Caribou didn't have plot armor to protect them, 😂