By Faust, he was fucked .

heh, quite literally.

This was... Surprisingly, much better than I expected. I find myself waiting with eagerness for more.

I guess reading about DayBreaker impailing herself over and over and over again would be a dull read, but I hope more detail will go into future sex scenes, and not just a buildup to it.

Oh this was a great read, I love this story, I hope there will be more of this story. Will you show the aftermath of the submission of the zebras even show a scene with what he did there maybe they gave him a cures on him for what he did? I hope Daybreaker with add a few more plans for Shining, as her pet and have some special training for him.

By the way, if you are interested to have your own cover art for this story, I am open to commissions, here is the link to my DA page if you want to take a look at my work. Hope to hear from you soon.

https://www.deviantart.com/amalgamzaku

I caught that FoE reference. XD No caribou invaders in this timeline!

They probably all died of snu-snu trying to outlast her. =P

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Actually, they were... well... let's just say that since Daybreaker is far more willing to resort to physical and magical violence than Celestia, that the Caribou military didn't have much of a snowball's chance in Tartarus of even surviving initial contact.