We all know that Celestia and Luna controlled the Elements before the Mane Six, but who controlled them before?
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Nobody. Story needs an AU tag.
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It has an au tag
Pacing is off, the characters need more background and the story overall is a bit off but I could see a Potential story if given some time. Heck a sequel would look good too. Maybe they all separate one day.
Extremely unrefined
I think it would have been better if it was something along the lines twilight reading a book about them and telling the other elements about them and seeing how they react to this new information.
*reads this*
and you will do that after them ?
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