Argent and Aegis, long time friends of Princess Celestia, return from a 5 year campaign of fighting in the far eastern lands. The happy reunion is shaken when Celestia, having a strong love for both of them, finally makes her choice between the two; which leads to hard changes, choices and the search for a new path in life for one of them.
A quick fix, but found a spelling error here..
I also found that the beginning was a bit dragged out, and then everything sped up toward the end. Perhaps consider editing the transition from day to night to day again, or edit the beginning to make it a bit shorter; something like that.
Aside from that, this was a fine story. You have my thumbs up.
Thanks for the heads up. I'll run through the opening and see what I can trim down to alleviate any drag in pacing. 👍