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Nobodyslament


I am a brony. I like warhammer. I play vidya games. I read frequently. Guess what? I also hate talking about myself.

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Three kids gon die tonight!

I do enjoy the Anon a Miss storyline but saying that it was based off of similar experience personal to you........


I'm really not sure what to say.


I think I'mgonna go watch some rally videos and rethink some things.

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I just decided to finally write something about it. I think to many stories here give an almost romantic view of suicide. It's gritty, but not always in a tragic sense. It can almost be a check list item that you look at with an almost detached determination. I'm not going to say something fluffy like it's to teach. I wrote this for me, and because I wanted people to see that sometimes even leading up to the event there can be a pretty serious disconnect.

Kinda want to see an aftermath, was the person who ran in one of her friends, now knowing the truth? Were those calls the same? If so, how will they feel knowing that they were too late...?

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Thanks, hope you aren't expecting much serious. I tend to do better in my comedies. If you want to read something more pure me, then I'd go for Inn at the end of Equestria of Worst Equestrian Necromancer. For my semi-serious Dingy Star and Memento Mori are all I really suggest.

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I don't think I'll do a sequel. This was a bit too personal to add anything to.

A bouquet of umbrella's protecting both the table

Apostrophes making words plural are the bane of my existence.

This was actually a lot better than I was expecting. Given the subject, I thought 1k words was about to be pacing at the speed of light, but this was actually pretty reasonably paced.

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Thanks, and sorry. Ill fix it when I'm not phone posting.

Personally if I ever kill my self it will be by drowning, as you only need to make sure you aren’t interrupted for about 3 min or so. You can live through a fall from any height, it’s just really unlikely, and if the quality of my life ever drops low enough that I do want to end it I would rather be assured that I wasn’t going to wake up worse off than I already was.

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THAT THE PROBLEM! This si why i hate these type of stories.

I'm sorry nothing pisses me off more than these types of stories they end in such a manner, and it becomes .

"Ok kids now you can know what happen afterwards how...By your imagination. That right! Just use your imagination to think of how the rest goes."

There no satisfying ending what so ever to it. Left open and then when it mentioned the author says. Well you can write the next bit."

Yeah sure but not everyone a writer. I don't write.

again sorry about snapping just hate these abrupt endings with no true ending.

I don’t really feel right giving this story a thumbs up. I know I should, it’s well written, but it just doesn’t feel like the right thing to do. That said, I wanted to tell you it is well written and I think does a good job at giving insight. While I’ve never dealt with serious depression myself, I’ve known several people who have, including my little sister. It’s terrible stuff, and I’m glad you failed. I think, especially for people like me, but even some looking back in hindsight, it’s so easy to rationally debunk most of the thoughts of worthlessness and the justifications, yet the main issue is that when someone is going through the kind of stuff that leads to those thoughts, their brain isn’t thinking rationally. Instead, it’s working overtime to try to prove them right, and in many cases, has a lot of outside things to cite for the case as well.

TL;DR Good writing, sad story, glad you lived.

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If I may ask why no thumb? I'm not sad or disappointed or anything, just curious. Also if you have an issue no need to use the kiddie-gloves. It's personal, but in the same breath, I'm no bitch. : ) If you feel like I didn't handle it right you can tell me. A lack of personal experience does not discount your opinion, nor does it make me feel like it's worth less.

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It’s nothing against you’re writing. I was about to hit the thumbs up when I just had a thought of it feeling strange to thumbs up a story that ends like that. I think you wrote it fine, but there is something about the thumbs up that almost seems happy, which just felt... inappropriate for the story. I’ve given it one now, as it seems kind of silly not to. Just get strange at the time.

Is this a reference to the song gloomy Sunday ?

I never really made a depression ( or I don't think I did ) but I often feel empty when I finish reading a story or doing a long project, it's like that I don't know what to do next and I can't decide to do something else to distract myself, and when I try it's always something small that don't last long. And I do that until I find the motivation and the project/story that can keep my mind busy for a time.

And I feel that Sunset, like you written it, seem in the same way that I do at these moments, she doubt, try to distract herself by doing something else, but at the end she know what she must do and she can't do otherwise because it's eating her.
And even if it's just my opinion among the others, I think you writed a great story.

Sorry if I did some mistakes, I'm French.

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