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Insta fave. I love this ship and i love its stories
Gaaaayyyyyy
Oh, and, like, cute 'n' stuff. :P Really like how the garden gave them something to ~bond over~ and how you can see even from the beginning what they're seeing in each other, why it makes sense. They click!
Also, super neat to see how your style translates to something more upbeat; it's still that distinctly strong character writing, just in a different sort of setting and with a different tone.
I'm up for more if you areYou actually did it.
Link is certainly not related. Nope.
nice and fluffy so far. You're a hecka cool writer, y'know? Keep it up! It looks like you're enjoying the journey.
I wonder if Wallflower Blush would faint halfway through Pink Floyd's The Wall.
And of *course* Wallflower wears a "plain white bra" while Sunset's lingerie is smoking hawt as hell. Nice contrast you've got going here. Especially since Sunset strikes me as more turned on than Wallflower, despite the wrappings.
I like the pace you set for yourself in this version of the chapter. Wallflower does Wallflower things as soon as they enter Sunset's apartment. Which is appropriate, methinks.
And then, ew, boobs.
You've got something nice and giggly going on here. I like how clean and consensual and *adorbs* it is. Keep it up. F'naaa.
-SS&E
Whoa! This is cute!.
Here's hoping for a second chapter
Good story, love it
They don't have to hold back anymore.
GAH, IT'S SO CUTE!
I just... I can't help but imagine tons of miniature Fluttershys dancing around, frolicking with critters, and giggling with merriment. Because of the capitalization, I can't help it. XD
I'm down for snuggle-smut!
Okay, I'm more than convinced. You're too awesome not to follow. Keep up the storytelling asskickery!
This was tender and heartfelt. I feels all warm and squishy now. =3
I went back and read the first chapter, not because I didn't remember what happened but because I wanted to have that buildup of feelings all over again going into this. And let me just say, it really pays off, sliding perfectly into this chapter. And oh my goodness, this chapter. This is so so sweet and I love their dynamic (and that they both keep asking if they're comfortable!) and just gah.
Oh and the whole thing's hot as hell. Enhanced snuggles? Heck yes.
I've been dunked on
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Tattletale.
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I had to up my game.
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That's from Undertale, not tattletale.
Aw
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I was calling 9706048 a tattletale. =P I wasn't referencing the game Tattletail.
Does there really need to be a sex tag/M rating if it's just snuggling?
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ENHANCED snuggling.
See also: lewdness
Oh. Oh! Oh my, the snuggling has been enhanced.
I love how absolutely awkward they both are on their little adventure. I look forward to seeing these two adorably stumble around/into eachother in the future.
Also, lewd.derpicdn.net/img/2018/8/19/1810458/medium.png
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I've always wondered if that would be discomforting. But, then again, that's all part of my innate attachment to my long-standing bewbs are just giant testicles theory.
Hand pillow? Naaaaaah...
Wellington, New Zealand?
Y'know, there's softcore.
And then there's sofffffffffffffffffffffffftcore.
I've always wondered how *speech* would (or should) factor into lemons/yarns/smut. Mayhaps this will be a learning experience.
D'awwwwwwwwww.
It's not just "consensual."
It's "comfortsensual."
You forgot the (SPIT) tag.
Mesa glad this is endearing and not mood-killing.
Egoraptor: Lot of "slowly" going on.
Oh Nietzsche *please* be futa.
This is a sensitive fic... but not a sensual one. I'm used to reading smuts that are uber-dedicated to describing every dollop of lubricant and salivary strand, but that's not the meat and potatoes of this. This is about the emotion and the amorous feelings being generated by the sensuality. Good on you for claiming a narrative tone and sticking to it. (get it? "sticky?")
Cute. And a solid factor of this fic's overall tone.
Silly Sunset. She had to learn that her Wally-Chan has animuu girl levels of sensitivity.
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Shimmer? I hardly even know her!
Not enough smuts focus on the inner sensations of both partners, or maybe I've been reading the wrong smuts.
We really haven't had any... medical terms at all in this story, have we? That's nifty.
D'oh. Never mind. It's fine. It'sfineit'sfineit'sfineit'sfine.
Hnnnnnnnnnng.
Intimate with a capital I. And while this is immensely, deliciously, psychologically sweet and consensual, it feels like the closest we get to something remotely resembling "assertively dominant." The softness of this fic is epic.
NOT A GOOD TIME FOR ANALYTICAL SEX TALK, DR. RUTHSET SHIMMER
"I hate sand, but sand's not like you. You're not rough or coarse..."
Whew. Saved it in the end.
Always the best part.
Hmmm. That's an uncommon one.
I wonder if even lesbians fake it.
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh plant girl.
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Misery detox indeed.
I'd prescribe more of it. The stuff it produces is fuzztastical.
-SS&E
This is so cute!
You monster.
Okay, this is the adorable sexy fluff I was here for. This is really nice. Thank you for taking the time to show these two being sweet together before things got heated. I like how you have them bounce off each other.
These two being awkward and sweet and figuring this out together... it would be very easy for it to kill the mood and yet it adds instead. How you can tell you're doing it well.
Also, with Sunset enjoying making someone shudder... I mean who can blame her?
Very sweet and sexy, plus you could hand this to someone as an example of natural affirmative consent and good communication. Very nice.
Now I just need to avoid all your other fics look like :p Since it looks like it'll be misery executed with the same skill and I'm not sure I can take it.
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for real, thanks though. glad you enjoyed the SunFlower snuggles, cuz let's be real they're perfect together
(you should totally read all my other stuff tho)
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They're so cute and gay and mushy, I love it! Also I don't know how to complement this while still sounding decent, so I'll settle with a hearty "Well done!"
Also
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The SunFlower is Inevitable.
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It would be weird to leave a comment about touching myself while I read this.
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Stan Smith voice: "It would be weird if you didn't!"
This is lovely and snuggly and fluffy. Just gonna finish it before--
--okay, that's quality sass. Immediate upvote.
This was mostly just adorable!
Also, I couldn't help but imagine that the "tummy flutters" we're tiny little Fluttershy clones with butterfly wings, just floating about and going "On my...oh my!" and "Oh! Please excuse me." and such.
This is so cute, I'm gonna diiiiiie D:
good end XD
tfw no hugging partner
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Consider my heart fuzzied and warmed!
Bddhshanahwge this was so cuteeee I'm dyingggg fbdndn
Lots of smiles were had while reading this, I've had this laying around forever and I'm glad I finally got around to reading it! This was really well written, every paragraph was lovely to read and painted a clear image in my head. Can't wait to read the rest of your stories!! <3
Welp, it took me... *checks calendar* five months to get to back to this, and this wasn't even one of your sadfics! XD I'm a huge sucker for romance, no matter the sexuality or gender of the characters involved. All I have to say is bravo!
Oh, and
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Oh come on! If you’re gonna do a sequel don’t spoil it for us!
Gosh that story is a cute one, loved every second of it.
Of course they'd do this all out of order.
Who needs formalities when you're just enjoying each other, after all? Very in-character, I'd say.
They just need something tall and strong attached to them. That's all.
Yes, yes, good. Good. This is some wholesome connection and desire.
The desire from both of them is palpable.
Good start so far. The gardening scene, as well as Sunset admiring Wallflower's gardening expertise, really set up their chemistry well. What you have so far is very sensual and sweet. Nice touch with realistic things, like Wallflower having trouble getting her shirt off. I know the story continues into smuttier stuff, but cutting it off here is a nice tease, as well as a hint towards the undercurrent to come.
In other words, nice.
Bonus points to you for continued checking of consent. So many fics treat this like inviting in a vampire: Once you say yes once, anything else is fair game. Kudos to Sunny, too. Such a good GF.
What lewd handholding. Just kidding. Super romantic and cute.
What a breathless line...
Man... This was really sweet. I like how you were pretty sparing with the details, and this is coming from someone who loves details, especially in things like this. Emphasizing the feelings between them is far more important than focusing necessarily on the acts/sensations. That's sensual in its own way.
Oh boy. Am I gonna have to reach for a cigarette? I don't smoke, but, y'know... Because, damn, the tenderness and sensuality in this.
Goddamn. You vixen.
Yes. Yes, you are. And thank you, Scampy, for writing this kind of intimacy, because so many writers on this site—even female ones—forget how hot and sweet and passionate and good this act is. I'll admit I kind of did a mental fist-pump when I realized what Wallflower was setting them up for.
Hnnngh, that caring consent. It's beautiful.
Alright, now I need to go smoke after this line. Man alive.
Bra-freakin'-vo with this one. I have no constructive critique to leave on this one, only that you should write more stuff like this. Not just happy SunFlower, but, just... the site needs more good erotica. More sensual, happy stuff full of consideration and eager consent and love just pouring from the edges. Sweet and sexy can be synonyms if you write it correctly. This is a great example of doing so.