Fluttershy had always felt at home in the woods. It was a place for her to feel safe, to be alone. Now she's finally found someone to share it with.
Originally a Secret Samantha gift on Rawrienstein's server for Eden!
Cover art by Apricalico
Inspired by the poem of the same name by Robert Frost
............ I'm speechless.
I know what she means about silence, and when you can hear the sound of snow falling. And the two of them together. And I love the image of the question's echoes carrying into the future.
Wow.
This has always been one of my favorite poems; it's the first one I ever completely memorized. It's a damn powerful bit of imagery, and you've captured it very very well. Thank you.
Beautiful, quiet bit of winter Sunshyne. Thank you for it.
SunShyne...my one (of several) weakness!
Good job, Beta. Simple, sweet and oh so delicate.
This.is.beautiful!
'watched' or 'falls'.
Love how you made this story without dialogue, but kept it fluent and meaningful.
Wonderful story! When nature speaks, words are superfluous.
Very nice. Love the internal monologue approach.
Also, crass though the question may be, were you thinking of the horse line when you put the Frost poem in there?
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“My little horse must think it queer” was absolutely part of my inspiration
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Glad I wasn’t the only one who thought of that.