Why am I still in this fandom?
In many versions of Equestria, Princess Celestia is the princess of the sun, and Princess Luna is princess of the moon, and always have been.
But what if that were not the case? What if their celestial roles had been different? What would Equesria look like where Nightmare Moon was never even a possibility?
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This has a few spelling errors. Try reading your story out loud to yourself to pick off the most obvious. Or, there are a few groups offering to edit your story.
That aside, you've got an interesting premise here, and I'd love to see more.
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Point them out and I'll be happy to fix them. I swore that I did go over this before I posted it. So I don't know how I missed them.
Edit: Fixed what I could find myself.
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It should be
Their cutie marks certainly didn't match their names anymore.
Good start.
Where did you get this picture from?
Solid first chapter, your style is quite captivating and it seems that you have put a lot of thought into this world. I’m curious how it’s gonna continue!
By the way, noticed a bunch of random typos. I can comb through the text for them and send what I find to you via a PM, if you wish, of course
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Just follow the link in the pic itself. I found it awhile back by accident myself. Glad I did too. And then there's Celestia's pic after that.
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What link?
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The source link that should be there if you scroll over it. It'll take you to the page I found it on.
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What source link?
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I just told you how to find it! You know what, I'm done helping people find it. You're on your own.
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Never mind I found it.
I see a lot of possibility with this story. Keep it up!;)
Who or what is that pony-like thing in the cover art?
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That's Luna. She's even described in the story looking like that.
Interesting premise. I would like to see where this goes.
Also, quick critique; I noticed a fair bit of typos in the text. It was clear that these are just errant finger movements or missed keystrokes so no biggie. Some of them I almost missed whilst reading, others I probably did miss.
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luna . mode sun
YES U UPDATED! IM SO HAPPY!!!!!!
Nice!!!!!
The only bad thing I found in this story is that it is very short.
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Did you miss, or purposely ignore, the AN that said I might do more with this universe?
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Still could've gone on longer. Also maybe you could put both the current pic and the old one side by side?
Can we also get a picture of what Celestia looks like in this story?
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This was originally just supposed to be a look at how Celestia and Luna got their cutie marks in this universe, and that was it. Twilight and Starlight's test was an added bonus I did.
So just be happy it's as long as it is. As for putting them both together, I have no idea how to do it properly. If someone wants to do it, I'll be happy to add it.
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That is Celestia in the cover art. Best I can do.
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Maybe ask someone on Da?
the picture of Tia as the Moon princess is BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! the blue is so prefect for her.