“That is the reason why I summoned you here, Twilight. There is a certain student that I want to tell you about, although you have met him before. He was not like what you have seen. He was a pony just like you, full of energy and promise. But then something happened.”
The pages stopped fluttering and Twilight gazed at the open page. There was a picture of a grey unicorn stallion about her age.
“Twist,” Twilight said as she read the name under the picture.
“Yes, but you know him by another name: Discord.”
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It's promising, but sadly, there are a few misspellings scattered here and there. Nothing major though. Have a like and a fav!
But re-read the last sentence in the description.
sound cool so far can't wait for more
As Symphony mentioned, there are a couple spelling mistakes. The most obvious ones are the misspelling of "Discord" in the description, and "stay" "fact" and "got to", which I believe should be "say", "face", and "go to". But this sounds interesting, so I'll fav it.
Moar!
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you misspelled discord in the story description. twilight is not amused
So far the flow feels a bit off, but the story itself has definitely caught my attention and makes me desire more. Going to keep reading to see where this goes.
Yes, I fixed the misspelling of Discord's name. funny how you spend time editing things only to have the simpliest of errors creep up on you like that. Anyway, the first chapter of the story is a prologue of sorts. The real adventure will be in the upcoming chapters.
Now we just have to make the connection between Twists's young mental state to his chaotic Discord one.
I eagerly await the next chapter my good sir!
Hmm, intriguing. Let's see where this goes.
Aww Twist seems so nice
Yes. He does.
But remember. No pony is born evil.
Owwwwwwww
i can't belive he is discord
A bit rushed,but it's still really good!
Continue my good sir.
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Actually Luna's but Yeahhh!
Luna's ex-student is Discord?
What a...
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Twist!
I am liking this story
Looks promising so far.
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Author's note: Yes, chapter 5 is short, but I guarantee the next will be back to larger chapters.
“Thanks, Princess Celestia,” Twist.
Um.
“Thanks, Princess Celestia,” Twist said.
She likes Twist
Wow... Out of freaking left field there... It's usually Celestia and discord, isn't it? This has caught my interest and I would enjoy more, good sir.
OH HELL YEAH! ANOTHER DISCORDXLUNA FIC!
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I write that pairing in two of my stories, but always nice to see more.
Well ZebraGirl and Dragon Angel Knight, You're both right.
Let's just say that next chapter you'll see a "Twist" in the whole romance area!
Sounds like Twilight had the fleeting notion, that if she were alive at that time,
she would've been quite good friends with Twist, until that pesky logic
got into gear!!
Well Twist I'd say is maybe not as much of an egghead as Twilight, but the two would definitely be friends, maybe even more.
Of course there's the whole "draconesque bent on the world's plunge into total chsos thing..."
very nice so far ^^ want moar
true love is powerful, but it can also be a weakness that can destroy some thing from the in side.
That how I see love sometime.
Keep that in mind for the next chapters.
Dawwwwwwwwww sister love it is so Dawwwwwwwwwwwwww
1213061 That is tue, but harmony is to do with balance, and you can't have true harmony without chaos.
Plus remember:
Oh shit.
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New chapter live!
So it's Celestia's fault that he ended up as Discord??
I'm guessing he tries to use magic to make her fall in
love with him, but something goes drastically wrong?
Celestia rejecting him does get the ball rolling, but what Twist does about it is what makes him become Discord.
the end is coming
Great story dow
Concludes??? Concludes??? Concludes???
No, it can't be....
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Well, the end won't be until several chapters from now, but ultimately it will end.
(Hey, I have about 13 oher stories that are in concept form after this, so fear not. The literary goodness will continue!)
He needs it
Oh shit!!!!!
I....I....don't know what to say about this one...
This is getting pretty good, looking forward to the conclusion. Can't wait.
I want to give a shout out to a friend and a very immportant person who has helped me with the entire process of making The Lost. His name is Robert Waldbauer, and before I went about this crazy idea of a fanfic, I collaborated with him at a convention back in May (gosh, how time flies). Hearing my initial idea we ping ponged some ideas oof each other which turned into what you see here. During the creation of The Lost, Robert has assisted in editing the story to make sure that in my excitement I don't totally goof the grammar.
So thanks Robert for helping to create what I hope is an wonderfully epic story for you dear readers.
And thanks for being a friend too!
Interesting. The very thing that had made Twist do this to himself is what defeated him in the end, and thus can only mean he didn't
really live her.
Also, "But that is a story for another time"??
Does that mean a......Sequel?!?!?!?
Don't you want to know how Luna became Nightmare Moon? (Spoiler Alert!)
You are now being keenly observed, purely scientifically ,
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So I can be informed of the creation of this possible continuation
of events pertained to in this script!!!
Or, I'm watching you so I can find out when you start it!!
That story was cute
I liked it, and if you're doing a Nightmare Moon one, I'll be looking out for it!
There are a few stories I want to do before the Nightmare Moon one, but reat assured, I have a list of all stories, and that one is on there!
Yes, the concept of "The Lost" was inspired by Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince, namely how Voldemort came to be. Villains aren't often born evil, but become evil through some reason. This goes for Darth Vader, Voldemort, Princess Luna, etc. So I wondered how Discord turned evil.