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Writing for fun. Mainly focusing on Sunset Shimmer and Equastria Girls related content

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It's New Year's Eve and everyone of the Rainbooms is spending some quality time with their families. Everyone but Sunset who has nobody to spend the night with. Yet, as luck would have it, Princess Twilight is also alone, so she invites her to come over to Equestria.

What sort of pastimes will those two come up with, now that they are finally hanging out without having to save anypony?

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Happy new yeaarr!!(Right now or tomorow?...Meh) happy new Year?!

Happy New year
From golden shadow fire

Happy New Year! (In 2 hours and 26 minutes!)

That was such a sweet story. Yes please make a sequel. I want more SunLight.

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I am glad that you enjoyed it. I will definitely make a sequel, so keep your eyes open. If there’s anything specific you would like to me to write in the sequel don’t hesitate to leave another comment.

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As of right now, I have no idea but I'm glad you're doing it.

“The books I ordered online have yet to be delivered!” After realising that, Sunset got back to bed, having lost all hope to find a fun way to spend her afternoon. Finally she laid on her soft mattress,

regretting not joining Pinkie Pie, who had kindly invited her to her annual reunion with her sisters, fearing to be a burden to her and the rest of the Pie family. At that point the only thing left for her to do was closing her eyes, hoping that she would remain asleep until the first day of school.

I'm pretty sure this is supposed to be 1 whole paragraph. :unsuresweetie:

“Yup”

A period is missing.

“Sorry, sorry! You were saying?” “Nothing's at risk. My friends are jut spending New Year's Eve with their families, while I'm home all alone. Well at least I was alone until you wrote to me. Thanks, Twilight. You rescued me from myself once again.” After Sunset had written down these things, it took a few seconds longer for Twilight to reply.

Technically she isn't with Ray there too. :ajsmug:

“She decided to spend some quality time in Sire's Hallow, since Sunburst and she have made amends with their parents.”

she and Sunburst*

“I'll be just you and me, doing the stuff we like and...” Suddenly the Princess of Friendship stopped talking.

It'll*

“I've just figured out that I have no idea what you like doing, cause we've never hang out before! This isn't good! I should have made plans! I am a terrible friend!” After saying these things, the Princess of Friendship began trotting nervously around the room, looking more nervous than ever.

hung*

“I understand...” Sighing, Twilight lowered her head, while Sunset kept quite. After a while a tear lined her purple cheek, yet the Princess of Friendship did her best to remain calm and collected.

quiet*

“Then Daring Do started swinging on the jungle vines and managed t escape Ahuizotl's fearsome beasts and return the treasure to a museum.” “I must admit that A.K must be quite the writer, if you're such a huge fan. Back when I used to live I Equestria, they did not publish Daring Do books, yet. The Rainbow Dash from my world likes her novels, yet I usually prefer reading other things”

things."*

“Good.” The Princess of Friendship added, smirking. “Why don't we read the next Daring Do book together? It's a new release so I haven't got the chance to touch it, yet”

yet."*

“Sure!”. After agreeing, Sunset sat just next to her friend who had already picked up the book she had mentioned from her enormous bookcase. Together they began to read the novel, occasionally giggling or gasping, if the narration conveyed them particularly strong emotions.

That period isn't needed after 'Sure!'

At that moment Sunset blushed: clearly her friend was doing this intentionally, yet that did not bother her at all. Twilight's purple fur was in fact very soft and its contact helped Sunset filled warmer in the cold room. If on one hoof her heartbeat caused her to feel a weird, new sensation, on the other one that very feeling was also very nice.

Sunset feel warmer*

Despite a few mistakes this story has, i enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

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I am glad you enjoyed it and I really appreciate the feedback. I am actually working on rewriting this story so as to fix the typos as the ones you pointed out and to improve some inconsistencies within the story itself. After finishing that, I am planning on writing a sequel to this story, so you’re welcome to stay tuned in if you are interested. :twilightsmile:

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