Sunset finally asked Twilight Sparkle out for a date. She wants everything to go perfectly well, she must impress her girl. But it seems that her plans aren’t working well...
Edited by the awesome Exterminate Regenerate! Thank you guy!
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Short and Simple. Just the way I like it.
And then they fuck.Cute story.5618986 i.imgur.com/slSEcGD.jpg
5618939 I'm happy you liked this
Boy me and you are just stroking baekgup's ego using his fanart huh xD
Reads chapter title:
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(Come at me, brony)
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good, cute, short ... and sunlight!!!!! the perfect mix!!!
little typo :“I know, it’s important for me too,” I took her hand and we walked into the reataurant.
i always hate when i type an a instead of a s
dunno if there's more
5619534 YOU'RE GOD DAMN RIGHT!
5619689 I'll fix that. And I'm happy you liked it!
5619068 What can we do? You know he's the best Sunlight artist out there!
I love this story, It's so adorable
5621583 I'm glad you found this cute!
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Hopefully, as long as baekgup is making these SunLight arts, we'll never run out of SunLight shipfics.
Adoracute story, plain and simple, but so damn effective on the daaaw level !
Keep up the good work !
5621962 Yep, if I see more art from him that make me inspired, I'll do more Sunlight (or any ship he does in his drawings). And thank you! I'll try to keep my good work!
Sunlight forever!
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Good, but... rushed. I love the idea of it, but it gets to the point a little too quickly for romance.
I will give this a like though... oh, and apparently I'm the 69th like.
i finally get some spare time read it, and again I LOVE IT
its so cute, twilight and sunset are the most cute couple ever :3
nice work
5653886 Thank you! I don't find it so good as She Looks so Perfect, but I found it fun to write. It's good to see you like it too! Watch out, I can do more Sunlight, maybe!
5653898 I can hardly wait.
Have a good writing!
This started off well enough, but it feels like you didn't quite know what you wanted to do with it, and the ending's a bit of a letdown. :/
That line may be believable when talking about pony Celestia, but I have a hard time believing anyone could say that this...
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...is pretty.
5760806 Remember that this is not in EQG style. Also: Celestia's legs are... God... IT'S GIANT.
And then she strangled Rainbow Dash.
I felt like Sunset and Twilight were way younger than they are. And naive too.
I enjoyed this. But the date did remind me of another fic I read, an Octascratch fic. I don't remember the title, author, or date published, I only remember how the date was ruined with missing dinner reservations and the gardens closed for work. Did you base the date in this off of that fic or the other way around, or is it just one big coincidence? Still enjoyed it regardless.
6176348 A huge coincidence, I never saw another fanfic like that.
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Yeah. I just remembered what it's called, Playing it by Ear. The date doesn't happen until one of the later chapters, and it all happens in Equestria with no humans, but the dates are quite similar. Also the fic is a good read, you should check it out if you like Octascratch.
6178878 Well man Octascratch is OTP so I'll sure read
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!
Sunlight is still one of my favourite ships. This is cute. Well done.
6792720 Thank you!
Norbert really gonna comment on sunset going in a suit by whatever.
I think it's best not to think that far yet pinkie. It's just their first date.
I thought the same when she was first seen in friendship games.
Glad that everything turned out well in the end and sci twi is now sunset's girlfriend!