Spike gets accepted at the Royal Knight Academy
Adopted?
9808545yeah he was adopted. it will be explained furthur in the story
you REALLY need to separate story telling from dialog, it look horrible the way it is now ...
9810897Thank you for the recommendation on my setup for the story. I will give it some thought on if I should or not.
9811120look at all the high quality stories here and see how dialogs are done then tell me if you should or not change it
9811514I am not trying to make this story "High-Quality". This is here for whoever wants to read it. If I wanted to make it like the rest of the storys that you want to point out, then I would have. But I did not want to.
98115149812734But I do see your point. it is a little uneasy to see. I might make a few changes to the dialogue and set up
9808545Yep, Spike was adopted, the next chapter will go more into detail about it.
This was a sweet meeting with half of the main six.
Adopted?
9808545
yeah he was adopted. it will be explained furthur in the story
you REALLY need to separate story telling from dialog, it look horrible the way it is now ...
9810897
Thank you for the recommendation on my setup for the story. I will give it some thought on if I should or not.
9811120
look at all the high quality stories here and see how dialogs are done then tell me if you should or not change it
9811514
I am not trying to make this story "High-Quality". This is here for whoever wants to read it. If I wanted to make it like the rest of the storys that you want to point out, then I would have. But I did not want to.
9811514
9812734
But I do see your point. it is a little uneasy to see. I might make a few changes to the dialogue and set up
9808545
Yep, Spike was adopted, the next chapter will go more into detail about it.
This was a sweet meeting with half of the main six.