Set during the events of “Flight to the Finish”, Diamond Tiara has pushed Apple Bloom far enough by making fun her friend, Scootaloo, for her inability to fly. To settle the score, Apple Bloom decides to come up with a prank that Diamond Tiara would never forget. Unfortunately, she would soon have to realize that actions can have severe consequences and that there are other ways to solve problems.
This is a “what if” story, where instead of just trying to help cheer Scootaloo up, Apple Bloom decides to get revenge on Diamond Tiara to teach her a lesson about bullying.
Warning: This story contains several serious accidents involving the runs! Read at your own risk!
Rated PG-13 for gross humor.
Chapters (4)
Boy, will Spoiled Rich not be pleased with her daughter for making friends with the CMCs.
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Perhaps Spoiled might not approve of it, but Filthy will most certainly will. I’m just concerned of how Apple Bloom’s family will react when they find out what happened.
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You’re right about that. But I’m pretty sure that she would also be ticked off at Apple Bloom for making Diamond Tiara have a huge accident in class.
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They’ll probably ground her for a VERY long time!
When I saw the title, I thought (and hoped) this would be a story about "28 Pranks Later"
Yep, I think Apple Bloom's gonna get a spanking as a result of her out-of-school suspension for what she did to Diamond Tiara.
IMO, a thermos bottle would be more likely
also, you might wanna add a scat warning to the description
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Got it.
Oh god no...
YES MORE PLEASE
The ultimate case of "Two wrongs don't make a right". Especially since laxatives are not a harmless prank at all, they can cause severe dehydration if used in excess.
Well that was...something. The humor seemed to fall flat (although I personally am hard to please on that front), and Apple Bloom diapering her seemed kind of forced and unnatural and overall it didn't feel like anything really happened plotwise; just kind of uninteresting in my opinion other than fetish content, and I guess this specific mix of fetish content isn't really my thing (too...dry I guess, like it's very repetitive and focused on extremes without going over the feelings/details).
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I understand your point. It's not going to continue being all about soiling diapers and changing them. The next few chapters are going to have some changes between Apple Bloom and Diamond Tiara's relationship with each other. The soiling and changing will be toned down over time. By the way, Apple Bloom had to change Diamond Tiara's diaper because it was part of her punishment and she was forced to accept her punishment.
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You're right about that. But at least it was laxatives and not ipecac or eyedrops.
This story has everything to make me laugh, then cry, then take pity. I felt really bad for Tiara having to wear the Silly Filly diaper. I hope that she's cured because you never finished the story.
There was a funny movie called Kickass 2, and what Mindy did to the 'Mean Girls' with the 'sick stick' is really funny in how she made the lead Mean Girl get sick out of both ends in vomit and diarrhea. I like to leave the address from You Tube, but not sure if this site accepts that or not.
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I put the story on hiatus, but now I’m working on it again.
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I saw that movie. It was funny!
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Don't give up on your story my friend as I think you have something good going with Applebloom and Diamond Tiara. I like reading different versions of Diamond Tiara deciding to be a good pony.
poor diamond tiara, I feel bad for her and apple bloom is suspended for a week, could I get some advice to continue my story, I could really use the help and my story I'm working on is called "daddy Discord: scootaloo" I've tried to submit it but the last two kind of got rejected :/
I have a feeling Spoiled rich is going to chew Apple bloom out, but that's just me
I'd like to see where this'll go, but doing another chapter takes a lot of work