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Lonely Fanboy48


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This story is a sequel to A Royal Apology


Before the ponies leave at the Crystal Empire, Shinning Armor apologizes to Twilight about what happen at the wedding in Canterlot.

Thanks to MoJoK20X for editing this.
https://www.fimfiction.net/user/221451/MoJoK20X

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Nice. It could have been something from the show. 10/10.

There could've been more done here to be quite honest.

Really, we're still getting these types of fics? A Canterlot Wedding was years ago.

Nice to see one popping up about an old episode.

9314170
Does it really matter though? I don't see why we need to write fics based only on recent episodes. I'm not trying to put words in your mouth, but that's what your text seems to be saying.

9316033
Yeah, but thing is, this particular fic genre is like Anon-A-Miss, old and tired and beaten into the ground. Just saying, some originality would be nice.

9316246
I would try that but’s it’s too difficult. I just want to write stories that will mostly will not happen on the show. Some of my stories does have originality like the Oliver stories

This was a fun read; short, sweet and to the point. It could have been made a bit longer and fill out more of the relationship between Twilight and her brother. But, that's just my opinion. Two thumbs up for this piece.:pinkiehappy:

“Coming through! Sorry but I’m almost late Twilight!” He panted hard but just before he continued running, Shining Armor uses his alicorn magic to lift Spike back. “Hey!? What are you doing?”

Shining Armor is a unicorn

“Of course.” They all than formed a group hug. Soon after that, they went back to the train station and bidded farewell. As for Twilight, she learned that the more her friends care about her, the more they will believe in her, which was something she should’ve knew back at the wedding in Canterlot.

For some reason that made me worry.

9314170
well it's nice to know its not another "twilight-punishes-everyone-fic-because-the-guy-thirsts-for-the-character-in-question" story

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