Lt. Spike, Lt. Ember, and Lt. Gabby are being sent to a remote system called Galvinux VII on a mission to investigate the disappearances of several embassy and scout ships in the sector. Little do they know they are being sent on a suicide mission. Before they left for their mission, they were given shots. These shots were not vaccines, they were genetically engineered viruses. Their true mission was to infect and exterminate the plague survivors on Galvinux VII. However, they are captured and found guilty of criminal trespass. With their guilty verdict, they are sentenced to four judicial rejuvenations each. Now, they are forced to relive their childhoods as well behaved children who get daily spankings as punishment for their crimes.
Includes Spanking and Age Regression Fetishes
Adaption of Palcomix's Growing Up Again series
Proofread and Co-Edited by Ryshinki
What happened to Spike?
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His rejuve will be the focus of chapter 2
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Oh ok also nice story :3
I like the way it came-out, its different but follows the basic storylines.
if this parody of Palcomix's Growing Up Again series.
won't be even younger then 6?
need lot work but I can get better
It feels all very rushed. You just state what happens and then move on. Try to slow down and really get into how they are feeling.
It's so rushed. Try to have a moment of reflection. Describe the scenery in detail.
Spike being so bratty just feels completely OOC. I get that this is not a serious story but you should try to preserve at least the core of their character. Spike is a fairly passive character. He usually rather observe than do something and he especially doesn't easily do something on impulse.
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I feel like you're right, so I edited the chapter to make him more passive, at the cost of less words
Love this chapter.