Applejack and Big Macintosh have a dark secret hidden in their past, when Apple bloom goes looking for her parents, she just might not like what she may find.
A riveting tale of of train wreck shippery from the creative Minds of Daring-Dash-Hoof and Regidar.
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I love it! Whoever helped you write this must be a genius!
OH WAIT...
SO MAGICAL!
I claim first first cumment!(Ehe heh)
Oh my flying pig-coloured AppleDash filly colt! That was funny!
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Glad you like it
Why did I read this...
And why do I enjoy it so much? 
1024142 OH BOY POINTS!
I tried to get this up on my FIM... they haven't approved this yet and are probably going to call duplicate on it.
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ahahaha, it's addicting.
1024174 The whole story was just all around hilarious. I tip my hat to you two good sirs for making me giggle.
1024200 I feel inclined to put my two bits in here, seeing as I helped write this story!
In fact, I did most of it, but Dashinculta edited, added more descriptive parts, and wrote a sizable chunk of it.
Anyway, glad you liked it!
* crosses fingers that there isn't already and won't ever be a clopfic version of this *
Saw it coming after I read the first line, but it's like a horrible accident on the roadside: no matter how bad I know it's going to be, somehow I just can't look away. Nicely done; wish it had been longer.
1024210 I did enjoy it! Very much so! I look forward to seeing what you write next.
OMFG MY SIDES HURT!
xD
That was awsome!
It would be nice if it was more detailed and more... 'frou frou', but the idea was still awesome!
1024236 Yeah, we were up until like twelve at night for this story. Sorry about the length, this is actually one of the longest stories We've written, in one go that is. And sadly, I can bet there is a clopfic version.
If you liked this, don't forget to watch both of us, we plan on doing collabs more often. Plus, we wrote the story in my style, so you might like some of my other stuff
Heh, it sounds like I'm just promoting myself. Trust me, I'd promote Dashinculta if he had more stuff. But watch him! Watch him hard!
Why did they beat the crap outta me?
1024364 YOU AGAIN!
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1024265 Frou Frou... not sure what to think.
If you want more like it, don't forget to watch us both!
1024255 Excellent... if you liked this, check out some of my other stuff if you haven't already!
>>Regidar
meh you know I'm the visual artist anyways. DA is where they can find most of my stuff.
My sides hurt......
I LOVED IT!
Heh heh, damn good writing bud.
"Complicated" is definitely the right word. Poor Applebloom. (And Celestia help us if this spurs a series of AppleMac - Macjack? - ships.)
Elijah didn't fully write it...
Only one who gets beaten up for it...
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Seems Legit...
1024403 thanks, glad to see you really liked it!
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When I said 'frou frou' it means more...
*cheking google translator* one sec
literary!
more details and stuff like that
)
(ofc a healthy amount of clop wouldn't hurt
1024403 Why thank you!
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1024482 Well, Dashinculta was smart enough not to READ THE STORY to the two people who they were shipping. I cannot say the same for myself, however.
1024547 You sick perverted bastard.
You're a stallion after mah own heart
Loved the ending
Its an ole fashion beat down!!! Yeehaw!!!
Wow, I knew Applejack was backwoods but wow! Hilarious.
--insert banjo tune from Deliverance here.
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*EXORCISM VOICE*
It will always be me. Forever
1024613 Here's to me be an ego tripper, and saying...
Thanks! I do find that people enjoy when I happen to get beat up.
1024805 Hilariously, it had nothing to do with her backwoodness, she was just super sozzled at a party and things got outa hand- er, hoof.
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Lol, many fics start off strong and have passable middles but then they blow it in the final round, this seems to be quite reversed.
The story is sweet and well written also containing a wonderful sentiment but there is almost nothing that can escape the dark shadow cast by the obvious shipping of beloved AJ with her own big brother....
except of course
DAT ENDING!
Oh my gosh. I had just read a sad story, and when I read this, I almost DIED from laughter.
It cheered me up. I didn't expect Big Mac and Applejack to be her parents. Before the I found that out, I thought her parents were porn stars or something. 
Im not all into incest, but this was great. XD
1025876 Aw, thanks for the praise! Me and Dashinculta appreciate it! And dat ending...
people are always amused when I get the shit beaten out of me, in story or in real life 
1026012 Glad we could cheer you up! This also had the unbderlying message of "not all inbred children are retards" thing, but that doesn't make it a good idea! Plus, I've never seen a fic with her parents being her siblings, so it had to be done.
And that would make a great alternate ending! Pornstars... I might have to write that.
1027107 Thanks! Glad we could make you laugh!
1027266 This was awesome! I COMMEND YOU FOR IT!
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I helped write it
1035589 You too!
The ending was worth reading through the rest of it.
The style is seriously lacking. Could use some better description. I understand that as something meant to be read by fans of the show, we should already be familiar with the locations. However, description shouldn't be almost entirely avoided. You should describe it as if you were there yourself. Like, what could you smell there? See there? Hear there?
You have talent, guys. There was a lot of whimsy present in the dialogue, but there's more to story than dialogue. There should just as much whimsy put into the rest of the story.
The ending was worth reading through the rest of it.
The style is seriously lacking. Could use some better description. I understand that as something meant to be read by fans of the show, we should already be familiar with the locations. However, description shouldn't be almost entirely avoided. You should describe it as if you were there yourself. Like, what could you smell there? See there? Hear there?
You have talent, guys. There was a lot of whimsy present in the dialogue, but there's more to story than dialogue. There should just as much whimsy put into the rest of the story.
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*MUCH TIME LATER AFTER RE-READING WITHOUT KNOWING IGT*
OH....
So apparently AJ and Big Mac are AB's real parents?
seems legit.
OFF TOPIC: I've always wonder if this was part of the original plan when Lauren Faust first concived of MLP: FIM; AppleJack being significantly older than the rest of the Bearers of the Elements of Harmony (in light of the following), Big Mac as her special somepony, if not her husband and Applebloom as their daughter.
Upvote for Apple family wincest because I'm a sick pervert
Do anyone know of any other stores that's just like this
1525756 About damn time.
Incest minus the clop? Yes. I liek dis. Just for something different.
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This was really good. It was kind of rushed, though.
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Yeh, there is one were Apple Jack and Big Macintosh acctualy are half siblings and Apple Bloom is there daughter, all though I can'
t rember what it is named!
3817060 i think it's called 'the truth'
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Ah! That's what it was called! I never read it to the end, so I just kind of forgot what it was named....