When Twilight Sparkle leaves her Kirin village behind to restore her lost voice, she meets another Kirin named Pinkie Pie, who insists Twilight join her quest to save Equestria by finding the mythical Elements of Harmony, arguing that the Elements can definitely restore Twilight's voice as well.
While Twilight is not convinced these so called "Elements" even exist, she sticks by Pinkie's side regardless, because she knows the army of wrathful Nirik chasing Pinkie Pie down are very real, and she refuses to abandon Pinkie to their clutches.
A Twipie-flavored Omniship adventure.
Chapters (8)
I'm sorry WHAT?! I had to do a triple take upon reading this. Explanation as to how, please?
Well, that's one way to take things from bad to good to worse.
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Fair enough. Well played.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
All i can say with what i have read so far is that i support the ship.
Yay! New friend!
Loving this AU.
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I'm very glad to hear that. I was a bit concerned by your first comment that you might have an issue with the trans thing.
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Sorry about my first comment causing concern. I was more just completely shocked due to not expecting it. I have no problem with the topic or those who are trans.
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No worries. I'm just glad you're enjoying the fic so far.
Yes please.
Hi, r u gonna continue this story?
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yeah. life's been kinda kicking my ass the last few months so i haven't been able to do much writing, but i have no intentions of abandoning this story
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Yeah, can't wait for the next chapter.
hurray I am happy to see another chapter thanks for continuing this lovely tale. I enjoy mute characters and the tactics you use for Twilight to communicate is amusing and adorable. As for errors i am not strong in this area but it is easy to read and feels pretty smooth to me thanks again!
I loaf this. ❤️
Twipie forever
Lol tho,
Rarity and pinkie flirting
Twilight walks in*
TWIPIE COMMENCES
rarity is rejected
Hahahaha! I love this story.
Alright, let's see where THIS goes.
As usual, no matter the universe, Rainbow is a smug bitch. That said, ALSO as usual, she's got a damn good reason to be.
Pinkie Pie is like a poodle. She's not entirely sure what's going on, but she's just happy to be around. And all the more adorable for it.
So, is that a Friendship is Witchcraft reference or just Pinkie's own insecurities?
And here we see Yeetlight Sparkle in her natural habitat of having none of some asshole's shit.
Dazzling Gleam, Sunny Day, Wood Hammer, you sure this ain't Pokemon?
Your comedy is on fucking point.
Confidence is always a win.
So, does that make you a necromancer or a Cleric?
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it is both :3c
She's a walking gay pride flag. What do you expect?
Well, she literally can't, for one.
Under those pink curls lies one hell of a sharp mind.
Aaaw, tilt.
Fun chapter, keep it up
Afraid so, Ponkers.
Wow. You know you're sad when PINKIE roasts you.
I love this. I LOVE it when authors remember that underneath the ridiculous mane, ridiculous personality and ridiculous antics, Pinkie is PLENTY socially savvy. She understands how ponies work. Arguably better since her mind DOESN'T work how most minds do.
Oh Sunny. NOTHING CAN SILENCE THE PIE!
I don't like the sound of that.
Anakin? I thought you hated sand?
Nokirin's perfect, RD.
The thing about rage is, you can only sustain it for so long. Literally, on a chemical level, you eventually reach a point where your anger 'burns out', unless, like the Hulk, Kirins have a gland or something that lets them effectively be angry forever.
Maybe not. But she's willing to try.
Agreed. And to the author's credit, she writes a damn good fight scene.
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YO i just wanted to say i appreciate this comment alot, cuz fight scenes are one of the things i care the most about writing and getting complimented on them feels hecking GREAT,, so tyvm!
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oh! forgot to leave a comment when we read this last-week-ish
just wanted to say we love the take on silent twi and how great the interactions with pinkie are, especially when twi does some ridiculous communication movements and pinkie figures it out in one shot
Huh Nirik is Kirin backwards
hehe pinkie's gay as heck
awww nooooo
good fight scene
we really appreciate twi's no nonsense fighting style of completely ignoring monologuing and immediately throwing stuff around
this part and the stuff around it reads exactly like rainbow is narrating it after the fact
The fanciest of Kirins.
Aw, you're no fun.
That, is terrifying.
Sandstorm wants to face Sandstorm?
Oh that sounds epic.
Does, is Rainbow a winged Kirin or...
Ironically, white and blue fire are WAY hotter than orange fire.
Cute.
She's not having ANY of this shit.
I mean, yeah, that's basically Shonen Anime in a nutshell.
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"i'll face myself" blares in the background as i fix that typo
she is not,, i intentionally chose not to use winged kirin or anything like that (and am rly glad the show didn't introduce any either and mess up my plans lmao)
i had to check to make sure i established it, but...
rainbow's using magic to create wings. granted, reading a couple of these passages thru again, i could've made that more clear, but oh well
I am looking forward on where this is going. I am just shocked that a Twinkie story slipped by without me noticing. They are best ship!
... wait, Nirik have claws?
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the idea is more that this particular nirik is creating claws with magic
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gotcha
something something pick up that can
Good Morning, everyone! I am broke as shit!
Man, I do hope we get to see Twilight emote more. Being emotionless sucks.
I'm really hecking amused at how close RD's transformation is similar to her Thems Fighting Herds expy, Tian Huo.
You're surprisingly wise.
... Sometimes, you need someone to do that.
Yes. Because she's Twilight Motherfucking Sparkle.
Uh oh.
Oh, that's, not good.
A red and black OC. What a fun day.
Oh, that's an interesting defense.
Nice work!
Oh that's not good.
Clever Pink Horse!
Holy shit, Rarity's badass!
It's Counter/Mirror Coat! You SURE this isn't a secret Pokemon crossover?
I imagine.
Thank YOU for uploading the best Omniship fics on the site on the same day.
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technically not an oc! more like..... oc adjacent
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tho it has occurred to me several times that it's completely not obvious that the supporting cast are meant to be the background kirin from sounds of silence, but oh well (i've considered changing the names to the Officially Accepted Fandom Names(tm) but eh, i'm not sure it's worth the effort at this point)
there may be some influence...... (tho i actually didn't notice this one lmao)
thank u so much for the compliment! i rly appreciate it! :>
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Sorta like the various Background Ponies before their personalities were made canon by Slice Of Life?
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yes! EXACTLY like that! love kirin of all shapes and sizes and i wanted to use heckin all of 'em
"i feel like i must save her, at all costs me personally only!"
"hmmmmmmmmmmm no"
"that sucks" sums it up pretty well
ah pinkie realizing twi knows exactly how to handle nirik 💜
welp, was nice knowin ya!
"classic"
they're really utilizing magical girl tactics here, and we love it
"ok so talking isn't working, let's beat each other up and then talk? sound good?"
she is isn't she?
>power up with rage
everybody be dark siding
just remeber peeps this was pinkie pie being pissed im waiting for twi to get a turn at being pissed
Too much anime, not enough Twipie loafing let alone shipping.
...why? Why does every single one of them have to be trans? Or any at all for that matter?
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Now this looks interesting.
This fic is wholesome and I live for it
Twilight is the only one who can't be a Nirik.
And that means she has to be the one to deal with all the other Niriks.
So she chooses the tactic to just sit it out
And honestly it's just so Twilight of her.