This story is a sequel to The Moon's Special Star
How much hate could one pony have? That was something Luna had recently discovered. A pony returns holding a bloodlust grudge against two certain princesses. Fulled by pure rage along with the help of certain dangerous ponies. He will seek out his revenge by committing the most terrible crime. He will take the life of a very special pony, dear to Luna's heart.
The lunar princess is feeling like her world is crumbling around her! Death, loss, conflict, pain, and tragedy. How can she continue on with her life when everything she loves is suddenly taken away from her?
This story is now apart of a trilogy:
- The Moon's special Star
- [You are here]
- The Troublemaker Prince
Chapters (11)
Very good so far :3 Cant wait for next chapter.
I loved your first story, but I can only take so much.
Please ... do not kill Twilight ... or when you have to ... bring her back somehow! Please!
I love Twilight far to much to see / read of my most beloved character of all times die ... Please 😭
Man, I hate cliffhangers >< can't wait for the next chapter.
Lovely chapter looking forward to more
Wow, this is getting intense.
When is the update?I
They gonna die slowly if Twi dies
Awesome job looking forward to more of it
ohh... dang u ... you made me happy than cry within 10 min ... i hate you...
well i cant wait for the next chapter...
will Twilight live or die?
if Twilight dies than how will Celestia, Luna, and everypony else feel?
if she lives than will the unborn foal survive?
if yes than we can breath a sigh of relief
BUT
if the unborn foal passes on before the baby is born than how will Twilight and Luna take it?
😥
Some nobles gonna die soon. Princess Luna, sic PINKAMENA on them and put the fear of Faust in their hearts.
Those wretched, deluded fools. They have to sleep sometime...
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Nice job on the chapter and pictures. Update soon
If flash is in a coma could luna not use dream walking to see him
needs to be "slapped" and
needs to be "STABBED" but otherwise pretty good.
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A coma is not the same thing as being asleep, there is no brain activity beyond what is needed to live IF I am remembering correctly. Ergo, no dreams to enter.
Awesome job there were a few mistakes but it is good over all
Moneybags is a dead stallion trotting
Time for op twilight to go all alicorn and kill him
This is getting super intense.
Over use of the words slut and whorse just kind of kill it. Try using other provocatives and what not. Sounds like a bad racist redneck porno. Outside of those little issues, still great story.
Great chapter
Great chapter. More please
SCREW YOU SPEARHEAD
Spearhead pressed F to pay respect. I hope it breaks his neck.
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ITS ETHER HE IS PARALYZED AND NOT ABLE TO MAGIC FOR THE MISCIBLE WELPS LIFE OR HE DIES SOON
I admit I loved the last one so much I don't want Twilight to die (which is funny because until just recently I never like love stories). but cures my love of the gothic arts I could never say no to a good tragedy!
... i thought twilight would die... but she... did not? I guess good job throwing off my assumptions i got from the title, description, and other chapters
Was there not a nicer way for twi’s nana to say that? I feel like the term fillyfooler may be slang in their world for faggot which I don’t do slurs. I would have got her to say something like…”oh sweetie, you’re aloud to happy, mare or stallion we support you sweetheart. You deserve to be happy.”
That is just me though I just feel fillyfooler might be slang I’m from the south in the US so if something is slang for something then it’s gonna be slang. Also I love your work and think that this ship is very wholesome.
1. Twilight is the most powerful unicorn in all of Equestria, her special talent is magic and she holds a lot of knowledge making her more powerful and more knowledgeable than Shining Armor in every way possible except strength when she was only a unicorn.
2. Twilight and her friends weilds the elements of harmony which is the only thing that can stop more powerful villains and threats.
3. After Twilight because an Allicorn, she basically became stronger than Shining Armor, she also became more powerful and now she has wings, she is probably even more powerful than Cadance, Shining Armor should know that Twilight is more than capable of handling herself.
In fact once Twilight is a full Allicorn, she will probably be even more powerful than Celestia.
And I will hate you.
If your gonna kill Twilight, she does come back, right?
I'm not really to worried about Money bags, I already can tell what will happen to him by the end of this, probably his head on a spike or bannished to the sun to melt in agonizing pain.
Ok, great plan, just 1 quastion, just what exactly does this accomplish? Oh and what will happen after there "dead"? They would never be able to enter Equestria ever again, in fact they would have to hide forever or experience death, and Celestia? Well, better hope she doesn't turn to the darkness that corrupted her sister, Celestia loves her sister, and loves Twilight like a daughter, kill them both and well, Celestia has nothing left to lose besides Cadance, but Celestia would be to blinded by rage to care, she would not only kill those who would even attempt on attacking those close to her but she would give them a slow, agonizing, painful, long lasting, death.
Well that explains the description and death tag, y'know I would like to point out that because of the Arthur's choice of words, I avoided this story for months, and the previous story as well because I thought Twilight died, and you made me worry over nothing!?
Eh I'm not gonna read canceled stories, and if the story is not mainly about Twilight or Luna than I probably wouldn't read it anyways.
Anyways, the story is great just like the last one, a good work. I actually regret not reading both stories sooner, you should really change the description.... Your probably losing views because of it, from all 3 stories.