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Crystal Aura


Long lost Princess of Crystal Empire | Writer & Editor | Admin@ Female Writers & Please Read My Story!

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Twilight Sparkle, the Princess of Friendship and bearer of the Element of Magic, embarked on a quest to find an old book with torn pages. Accompanied by Spike, her faithful assistant, they decided to seek assistance from the Royal Sisters to access the restricted section of the Canterlot Library, just as they had done during Sunset's recent arrival. The sisters agreed, leaving Twilight to continue her search for the elusive book.

After an extensive search, Twilight's efforts were rewarded when she stumbled upon a book titled 'The Journal of the Two Sisters'. Realizing the opportunity to delve into the secrets of the oldest deities, Twilight and Spike eagerly began reading through its pages. Little did they know, they were about to uncover a wealth of knowledge that Equestria had never known, didn't know, and perhaps would never know at all.

[Update : 29/04/2023] Thank you to all who read my story as it has 541 views!
Special thanks to Sunsetsjournal for helping me along the way!

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 18 )

This looks very promising and I really look forward to reading future chapters of this story.

I'll try to not disappoint you! :pinkiehappy:xxxx

Go, Crystal! This story is gonna be awesome! Great cover by the way. :twilightsmile:

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Thank you for the support! The cover is made by myself by combining some images from Google. Thank you! xxxx

Very cute. Celestia looks adorable, as well as Luna! :trollestia:

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Thank you! I loved them too! xxxx

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Thank you for notifying me! Seems that I had forgotten that little detail! :twilightblush: xxxx

Generally not a good idea to name a fanfiction with the exact same title as an existing installment of the series canon or extended canon. It carries unfortunate implications of plagiarism/clickbait.

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boo you killjoy

*Squawks politely, then pawsigns in reply... *

I'm not an editor, so please take this as only a tiny suggestion...
This is a good read, altho it seems things happen at a too-fast pace, like you are hoping to write the juicy parts first, but then need some filler for the first chapter.

Not an issue by any means... just a comment. ^~^

And if it were me, I would have asked the princesses their permission upon taking their journal.

Can't wait to read more,
Cheers mate,
Gryphon <><

A rather short chapter but that's probably to be expected since Celestia is young at 10 years old. Very sweet though.

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Happy to know that you like it. Stay buckled up for Luna's entry, which is next! :pinkiehappy: xxxx

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Don't worry I will.

Good job as usual, can’t wait to read more. Just one question: we’re did you get the names for the princess’s parents?

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Thank you! I actually got the name 'Cosmos' from a fanfic & 'Galaxia' from net. Loved the names, though!:heart:

Wow, it's a bit longer than the previous entry!

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Yeah, Luna has to say a lot to her readers after all! :raritywink:

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