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A young stallion goes on a journey to bring his family back from western Equestria after they are kidnapped by some sheriffs who use him for their own personal gain. This story was inspired by the movies A Fistful of Dollars, A Few Dollars More, The Good, The Bad, The Ugly, and the game Red Dead Redemption.

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This could be good! I'll read 'er later.

BTW, you might want to use some of the music from Railroad Tycoon 2 and 3 for some scenes, they're quite good. And, by any chance, would you insert OC's?

I know I left you guys with a bit of a cliffhanger, but I'm gonna let you guys decide what happens to Four Strings. Do you want him captured or saved? If he's captured, he will fight his way out of the fort. If he is saved, he will have to develop another strategy to capture the gang leader.

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Sure, i'll add your OC if you want. Just message me with a description of your character and if you want him/her to be a sheriff kinda pony or an outlaw.

E-quest-ria?
Alternatively, Eek-west-ria.

I read it, it's pretty nice, but it doesn't explain in enough detail, doesn't get me really into the story.

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Sorry about that I felt it had a slow start too but it should get better.

So you've finally posted a story. :yay:

I'm going to have to read this later.

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