Set after the story Cupcakes, Pinkie Pie soon goes into a dream that will set her free.
Improvement is a dire mistress.
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It’s 2018. Don’t do this.
Please.
I'VE ALWAYS TRIED TO FIND THAT STORY BUT I NEVER FUCKING COULD
Linkie?
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did you even read the story?
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Seargent Sprinkles has an account, but I don't think he has it on this website.
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Yes.
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And what was inherently wrong with it then?
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The pacing could really use work, for a start. Using ‘Cupcakes’ was hardly the best idea, though, especially for a one shot this short.
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anything else?
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Honestly, it’d be best to read over your story and go from there.
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why when I already read through it and thought it was fine?
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Because being able to look over your work and spot mistakes and areas improvement is a good skill to have.
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Like what?