• Member Since 7th Oct, 2012
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CrimsonEquine


Improvement is a dire mistress.

Comments ( 11 )

It’s 2018. Don’t do this.

Please.

I'VE ALWAYS TRIED TO FIND THAT STORY BUT I NEVER FUCKING COULD
Linkie?

9147776
did you even read the story?

9147788
Seargent Sprinkles has an account, but I don't think he has it on this website.

9147805
And what was inherently wrong with it then?

9147817
The pacing could really use work, for a start. Using ‘Cupcakes’ was hardly the best idea, though, especially for a one shot this short.

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Honestly, it’d be best to read over your story and go from there.

9147861
why when I already read through it and thought it was fine?

9147871
Because being able to look over your work and spot mistakes and areas improvement is a good skill to have.

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