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HavelssVampir
IDK, ponies I guess. You know, whatever I feel like, which means ponies ALL THE TIME!
HavelssVampir
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Oh hey, heh, kinda' forgot to say but if ya'll would be so kind as to tell any ways to improve I would be eternally grateful. Keep in mind there was a one hour time limit on this, so don't push too hard, yeah?! I would really like anyone who thumbs down to comment too, to tell where it went wrong, please?
Well, I don't know why I even read this...
Anyways, the last two paragraphs confuse me. They seem to be alluding to something that I missed. Mind you, I skimmed the actual clop, so their is a good chance that you said it and I just missed it, but it still confuses me; it seemed to be alluding that Lyra really is a human... or something like that.
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No, actually, I was alluding to earlier when Lyra had kissed Bon-Bon on the muzzle, and then Bon-Bon blushed. Reffering to that, I was saying as if Lyra had known more about love than Bon-Bon, and that they loved each other and Bon-Bon didn't know it yet. Does that make sense? I feel like I worded that poorly.
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Ah, I missed that, this is written under the premise that Lyra and Bon Bon are not an item, only freinds-with-benefits, that makes more sense now, I think.
i came
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Lyra came without even being touched?
But this was a pretty good read. Short and sweet and to the point.
Have a thumbs up. 
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Well that strap-on was worthy of burial the vibrations were so dangerously strong but if you think it takes more than that to get off in that situation than you know to each his own, *cough* buckin' animal *cough*
“A human!” Lyra blurted out with an everlasting enthusiasm.
How did I see this coming from the desc?
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Probably because that's a huge load of fanon but dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png you know, could be anypony's guess. I certainly wouldn't know anything about it.
wat
1389653 There was some sex and RPing. Not much more to say.