Bursting into random pop music songs has been an Equestrian tradition since the dawn of time, or maybe not...I mean somepony must have started the tradition right? Or maybe not somepony...Some siren! Who knows where she and her sisters got the idea from?
Warning: this story contains references to Greek mythology.
Did I tell you how much I love Greek Mythology?!?! I'm in love with it ever since Rick Riodan's Percy Jackson came into my hands & I started reading it! Well there was very little Mythology & I was very disappointed by that Anyway there were a few typos which you need to correct. I can point them out if you want! xxxx
end marks go inside of the quotation marks like, "Okay, I believe we are ready." Other than that, good story!
It’ll be better if you make this text a bit big & bold. Probably also use a bit of italics....
Did you mean roosters instead of rosters?
It’s Equestrian, not Equstrian
Needs a comma after the word evening
Remember should be remind
Tense change : noticed instead of notice
The word ‘her’ should be included after the word ‘for’
You must’ve meant peace instead of piece
Throttingham should be Trottingham. Maybe you meant sirens instead of sires.
Throttingham mistake again.
Grin should be changed to green.
A comma needs to be placed after the word warning.
I’ll keep checking out for others!
Liked the story, but there were typos. Seems like you wanted to finish & didn't revise before publishing. Anyway,
I'll be glad to point out the typos if you want me to! xxxx
Nice to see refererence to the story in 'Fiendship is Magic'
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Glad you like it!