When the magic of friendship shattered Adagio's gem, she was wounded to the core of her being. Human medicine can't set right a magical problem, and that means Sunset and Adagio will have to go on a Fantastic Voyage back to their homeland for a solution.
Is Equestria really ready for the return of what was once a terrible monster, or will Adagio's bad habits snatch defeat from the Jaws of victory?
An entry for Oroboro's Sunset Shipping Contest
Sex tag is for lots of innuendo, which was all but unavoidable given the pairing. No actual sex happens on screen. Don't ask about the bedroom.
Remember, kids: Vore is like a hug with your insides!
Chapters (3)
OOoooooo vore!
Gonna read this in a little bit.
Goddammit, Magnet.
Exactly what I wanted out of this pairing. This is the ultimate Sunset ship.
Loved it. These two make an odd but good pairing.
The snark from the two of them is a wonderful thing.
Best thing was Sunset getting eaten.
Wow. Talk about eating problems. :D
I'm curious where the mass goes when they cross the portal. Are the sirens actually that large?
And I spotted at least two references there. How many did you add?!
Good show, MB, but it's Starlight who Twilight can't beat in a fair fight. Let's keep the overpowered Unicorns and making Alicorns look bad to a minimum, shall we? I get enough of that from the show.
That was pretty fun!
As I type this, this story is in the feature box, contains vore, and has zero downvotes.
What a timeline this is.
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Hey, it's not Twilight's fault Celestia was probably too concerned she'd screw her up like Sunset that she never taught her proper combat magic as a precaution...despite repeatedly sending Twi into situations she could have really used it.
Headline: Queen Novo makes diplomatic visit to Canterlot, steals all the spoons, paperweights, and random arcane paraphenalia while screaming "SEE HOW YOU LIKE IT!"
She considered taking the cake forks, but didn't want to start a war.
As if the hippogriffs didn't steal that siren-sized artifact in their turn. It's the cycle of antiquity, Queen Novo!
Also, you hippocrites eat fish yourselves. Fish oil tea, indeed.
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I think they all eat kelp and seaweed
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I don't really think beaks are conducive to vegetarianism.
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Underwater they don’t have beaks
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Not sure Celestia would have taught Sunset combat magic either...after all, the Element of Magic isn't supposed to De-Nightmare Luna by defeating her in a steel cage match, cool as RD might find it.
That poor table.
Adagio sang again! She showed those worthless sea ponies who's boss! I am a bit upset that Twilight of all people did not support Sunset in the end. I noticed that she was not keen on giving Adagio a chance from the beginning, but still, Sunset loves her siren and Adagio loves her little pony. That's what makes this story perfect.
9130829 It's just Sunset's opinion, and the girl is rather cocky.
9131695 I was just thinking the same thing. The last rightful owner of the crown was Adagio's mom, right?
And? :P
"Queen Novo, we wanted to send an ambassad--"
"If we declare war, would you stop sending diplomatic envoys that wreck my home and steal my stuff?"
"Well, then we would have to send people until we can agree on a truce, and then there would be peace talks, congresses, discussions about reparations..."
"Thought so. Well, Princess Sparkle, it would be my pleasure to receive this ambassador. Please send one who causes minimal collateral damage."
I liked this more than I was expecting. Adagio x Sunset is possibly my favorite ship ever, but this is the first one I've read where they spend the majority of the story in Equestria. It was fun reading about the way they interacted in their original bodies, and how they got on despite the differences in size.
Never been one for Adagio in general, but I'm a fan of the interplay between her and Sunset that you've got going on. A solid concept with a hilarious and engaging first chapter. You've got me hooked.
There's always a bigger fish...
Loving this story.
She evidently doesn't know about pigs, bunnies, cows and so on. Also not every fish is good as food. In this way Adagio is slightly retarded in this story.
Oh, come on, Novo. The ocean is a horrifying arena of death. No matter how much your fish sounded like Beloved Award Winning Actress Helen Hunt, she was destined to end up in the belly of something horrible eventually.
Seriously, the ocean is the Major League. We’re a bunch of five year olds playing tee-ball up here.
I grew up listening to Mitch Miller Singalongs.
I WILL HAVE THIS SONG
STUCK IN MY HEAD
ALL GODDAMN DAY
THANKS A LOT MAGNET
I'm glad someone else writes Skystar like the flibbertigibbet she is. :3
goddammit XD
The mention of vore in The description made me skip this during the contest.
Silly, silly me. It was one of the funniest and cutest stories I've read in a while. Have an upvote.
I love the love in this! Great job! I approve of this ship!
Needs more vore
THIS is COMEDY.
To be honest, any unicorn who doesn't realize that they can teleport out of a stomach deserves to be eaten.
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Not while unconscious.
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Can't scare off the contest makers.
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It happens when you have a carnivorous gf three times your size. Just gotta get used to it.