The merchant is very good at what he does. ...Usually. These are short snippets of how some of his items... Backfired. The results should be pretty interesting.
This is a crack fic, don't take this seriously.
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I must admit, this chapter drew more than a chuckle out of me. And being honest, was thinking in these lines for a future project and yet, I'm happy to see other authors seeing the potential of things going wrong here like you did here.
Will be tracking for future releases.
PS: Besides some minor flaws in formatting and a typo here and there, this is quite well-written.
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YES! Someone finally comments on my stories!
Aside from that outburst: Typos? Where?
9113445
It is always for the best to avoid this misuse of parenthesis, since it can in fact be added into the paragraph without issue. Alternatively, it can be employed as a show of the guy's inner thoughts. Of course, this would need some more work to achieve, but it can be done.
In red is the spot where it feels incomplete - period missing too. And there is where the formatting went bad, as it is shown.
Missed an 'e' in Fluttershy.
As I said, minor nitpicks.
9113445
Try updating more often, along with joining enough groups that are pertinent for exposure purposes, and you'll get more commenters in the long-term.
Of course, I'm also guilty of not doing the first bit I'm suggesting - IRL kicking my 'nads ain't helping matters in my case, but I digress.
Alternatively, go into the 'one-shots' realm. And do them right. Word'll spread out if your work is steady and good.
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9113476
You haven't seen my other story...
Anyway, I'll fix the errors. Thanks for pointing them out!
Okay, this has potential to be funny and a great story to enjoy.
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Thanks!
Angel the alicorn of course! Have you not seen his short fuse for a temper?
9127978
He doesn't stand a chance against Fluttershy... Wanna know why?
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... the Stare... and because she's Batmare?
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BECAUSE SHE'S BATMANE!
Good story. Personally, I think this has potential to go forward with more ridiculous scenarios, like someone turning into mug Man but is just the mug part, or Venom instantly killing it's new displaced host and going off to someone else.
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Actually , I was thinking either ‘Wobuffet Mirror Coat’ or ‘Warranty still in effect: Displace refund’
9798177
Both of those are great ideas!
I wonder, how many times can he avoid displacement?
HA! Great chapter. I like how they thought he was a changeling because of the green flash and turning into aliens. Also liked the continuity of the Omnitrix self-destructing and blowing up the universe.
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Thanks!
I was wondering if anyone would get the reference to the self destruct...
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Yup. First Ben 10 movie, right? Where Ben's Omnitrix starts a countdown to wipe out everything.
9854878
Yee.
wow
I gotta be honest I wasn't expecting a whole lot from what about to a bunch of one shots but was pleasantly surprised. I hope you do more of these and I'm definently liking and following
10271952
I don’t get it, why do people like this story so much? It wasn’t even something I tried to do seriously.
10272273
For me it's the novelty they are well written and fun.
This just popped into my head go to 2:15
This one was actually interesting... The Pokemon universe, I mean.
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...Should I take that to mean the previous chapters were bad?
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No... It means you're reading too much into that...
Each chapter have its own little story... I never said there were bad
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Sorry, just read to much into the ‘Actually Interesting’ part of the statement. Usually that implies prior things are boring in comparison to the thing you’re referring to.
10272273
They are the best kind of story.