PabloTheDestr0yer71
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despite my dislike of grimdark, this is good. well-written and everything
This is.. very Cupcakes-esque. I approve!
Though I was expecting a vivisection to be the main part of this chapter, this is much more entertaining. There's also a lot more continuation potential for this path.
I'm interested to see what she did with Pip. Hope you continue this.
..........SHIT!
nonononono grimdark, gore fic XD
My Little Kraut: Friendship is Dissection
THIS IS JUST LIKE MY BIRTHDAY PARTY...
Not really... Obviously.... Good story though! Going right to favorites!
Thank you all for the positive feedback, it's much appreciated!
Just a heads up, the next couple parts are where it starts getting really... juicy. (and yes, that was double entendre)
I'm still debating on whether or not I should bump it up to mature!
Your friendly neighborhood overlord, PabloTheDestr0yer71
Cool ive been looking for a new upbeat grimsark since the story the curie mark killers and I think I found it also I find my avatar picture very relevant to the story
Hmmm, I prefer my gore to have a bit more of a build up rather than a quick sprint to the "meat" of the issue...
Vell...thats f*cked up
I'm gonna agree with Unahim on this one. This story really should have been quite a bit longer.
I'd have liked to see Scootaloo's, and Sweetie Belle's little fights each have their own chapter.
I also think you could have extended the part involving the reanimated versions of them, there was a lot of potential for build-up in that.
All its an interesting little piece of disturbing fiction.
What was that last pop? Did she lose it again...?
1034491 Most likely
At first I was like
Then I was like
Now I'm like
Cool story.
It would've been more enjoyable if, like others said, there had been more suspenseful anticipation before the gore and death. It's far creepier when the narrative creeps up on the moment of violence instead of just getting it over with in one fell swoop. There aren't any fanfics I can remember where Twilight follows that formula when torturing and killing Spike, which is something I'd like to read. The Twilight Zone, although a great homage, was also a little far-fetched, which is only to say that keeping things in the school building rather than a dream sequence would have kept me more grounded in reality and made the whole thing grimmer and scarier. Still, it was pretty fun and creative, and your version of insane Twilight was super-creepy.
This is a pretty good grimdark fanfic, and I really got a kick out of that great ending. Especially the line: "What the buck is so funny about death by giant coconut cream pie?"
I smell trouble