I'm gonna agree with Unahim on this one. This story really should have been quite a bit longer. I'd have liked to see Scootaloo's, and Sweetie Belle's little fights each have their own chapter. I also think you could have extended the part involving the reanimated versions of them, there was a lot of potential for build-up in that. All its an interesting little piece of disturbing fiction.
Hmmm, I prefer my gore to have a bit more of a build up rather than a quick sprint to the "meat" of the issue...
Vell...thats f*cked up
I'm gonna agree with Unahim on this one. This story really should have been quite a bit longer.
I'd have liked to see Scootaloo's, and Sweetie Belle's little fights each have their own chapter.
I also think you could have extended the part involving the reanimated versions of them, there was a lot of potential for build-up in that.
All its an interesting little piece of disturbing fiction.
At first I was like
Then I was like
Now I'm like
Cool story.