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The Cowardly Writer


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This got wierd... I uh... Am not sure how I found this...

Why does a pony have barbecue sauce...

When the stars align and the prophecy is fulfilled, Cheerilee will eat the royal sisters and then the whole universe.

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Nightmare Moon used to eat foals, apparently. Maybe it was more for population control rather than punishment.

The writing isn't so bad, it's actually pretty good, just remember to put a double space in between paragraphs and be careful of homophones.

Just some spelling errors but nothing too serious.

Pretty sure once they saw what happened to silver spoon Applejack and Rarity would have found out and Cheerilee would have been strung up by the apples

That. Is. What. Diamond. Fucking. Gets.

Is was awesome, but fucked up at the same time

Heh, I wonder if Silver Spoon would have better luck being the predator rather than the prey?

I wonder how long it'd take before Silver Spoon started imagining it bearing HER as the pred.

Heh, poor Silver Spoon. At this point, given Cheerilee's stated intention for ONE of her students to survive, Silver Spoon just lost her chance. Although, given how consistently quickly she lost her willpower to her stomach's demands, i question her determination to carry through with that single student pledge..

But now, Silver Spoon's got only 3 choices: force herself down Cheerilee's stomach, forget about being a prey, or become a pred herself.

I vote the third!

Desperate times, desperate measures. While I still want to see a Silver Spoon!pred, I can't say that this wasn't a fun little story. Good work on it!

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