This story is a sequel to Rainbow Dash and the Darkwing Pony
After watching the 14th episode of Season 6, I decided to write up my own adaptation of the episode, giving it my own take on what I believe could've happened.
It's time for the annual Applewood Derby Cart race in Ponyville, and every team is working hard to make sure they win a prize, but to also have a fun time while doing so. But one pegasus' desire to win could lead her and her young partner into trouble.
See if you can spot the references I've added in here.
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Okay. This has no right being here. 4th wall breaking is an overated and f***ing stupid thing to do. Even more so when it's not Pinkie doing it.
Upovte for eveything else but that.
Geez that's a bit harsh What bit you in the ass
That story was really good I wish there's a better reason for Diamond and Starlight to team I mean they haven't interacted.
Love the Top Gear references!
You did a pretty good job on this! I too agree that the actual episode that we got could have been better.
Although, I'm not entirely sure if Rainbow Dash would actually CHEAT in order to win. Sure, she can be very competitive, but I feel like RD learned her lesson in "Fall Weather Friends". (I may be wrong on that, though.)
Also, I kinda wish that there was a little bit more with Diamond Tiara and Starlight, just to flesh out their characters a bit more.
And finally, I think you should have described the carts in a bit more detail, like what colors were they, what did Sweetie Belle's cart look like, etc. Just a suggestion.
Otherwise, you did a pretty good job.